I'm a Bag Man

Mar 18, 2005 15:02

This was an excericis we had in my English class, I liked it so I thought I would post it. We had to write and say if we were a bag what kind of a bag would we be and what would our contents be ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 4

shadecat April 4 2005, 20:24:49 UTC
A mini poem for YOU! Cuz you loves the gorgeous blueness as well.

Here it is, faintly touching me like a shadow
Traipsing through my mind,
Filtering my thoughts before they're concieved
The bereaved pain of lust,
Betraying me with its insinuation to every scene
Almost cohercing me to react,
Making the innocent touch a heavenly sensation
Breathing's become intoxicating
Scent ravages me from within
Leaving me a husk of need and sin

Alaerys - 05

Yah yah, it sucks and it's discordant.. but I just made it up. What do you expect ;)

Reply


bamboosticks April 5 2005, 08:02:36 UTC
Thank you very much. I don't think anyone has ever written me a poem before. I think it's beautiful. You should comment more often, since they make me so happy.

Reply

shadecat April 5 2005, 22:20:54 UTC
Pff.. commenting often makes the specialness of it wear off..

That or I'm usually out of time and can't comment to anyone.
I'm glad you like it though. And yay for making you happy.
Like my new icon ;)

Reply


fibbleswings April 22 2005, 01:18:13 UTC
okie, been over a month. Post something please. That would be nice...

♥Love

Reply


Leave a comment

Up