Comments | bamboosticks: It's Been A While

bamboosticks

It's Been A While

Jun 08, 2005 23:34

Ms. Seal said that my edgy poetry is my most original stuff. So I wrote this poem a while ago and I didn't like it, so I made it rhyme which I think improved it. I'm still not sure what I think of it though so let me know what you guys think ( Read more... )

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sussie08a June 9 2005, 07:05:59 UTC

Of topic...but important...

WHEN ARE U COMING TO HARVARD? BIZNOTCH?!

no offense ;)

stars4bea June 9 2005, 08:06:53 UTC

I like! I like the rhyme scheme as well.

falleavesbeauty June 10 2005, 09:33:04 UTC

UGH! I had a whole comment posted and x-ed out of the screen accidentally. Rrrrrrrrrr! Beyond annoying. Anyway ( ... )

brown_crayon June 13 2005, 21:00:38 UTC

Can you say i miss you like crazy?? ur the one true love of my life...i love u kareem, u know that. im glad things are going good for u and ur gf =D

brown_crayon June 13 2005, 21:02:00 UTC

BTW!! ive been meaning to give u this site...

http://www.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewProfile&friendID=11316534&Mytoken=20050501132042