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bamboosticks

Watch Out Now

Sep 23, 2005 02:51

It was kind of a weird night, and now I'm up really late on a Thursday night. But it's ok because I don't have class until 2:00 tomorrow. Anyway, I needed to stay up a little bit before going to bed. I had been thinking about this poem all day, bouncing the idea around in my head. And since I tend to write my stuff at night it had to be done at 2: ( Read more... )

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glisse September 23 2005, 09:37:12 UTC

I really like this one. Makes me wanna start writing again.

bamboosticks September 23 2005, 22:43:56 UTC

That's cool, I'm glad that I made you want write something. It would be cool to be the inspiration for some other form of artwork.

glisse September 24 2005, 02:54:07 UTC

I'll choreograph an interpretive dance. XD

fibbleswings September 23 2005, 12:02:13 UTC

I have a guess.....but I really don't wanna be wrong!! But I think I'm right...I don't know. Hmm. Not that I really need the reward of ten points and eternal affection, because, really, in all fairness, I should already have all that....right?

bamboosticks September 23 2005, 13:32:41 UTC

You can feel free to guess. I won't be judgemental. And in all fairness, although you may have earned my eternal affection there's still the ten points, which I have yet to award anyone. So everyone else has the motivation of ten points and my eternal affection, since you're special you have to try for just the points.

fibbleswings September 23 2005, 15:53:44 UTC

whoa, that's so weird seeing my name from someone I don't know! Anyway...umm, about the points, I thought that I had so many points that these 10 didn't really matter? But of course, I'm not the one keeping track, that would be you.
Whatever, competing for points is always fun. Ahh my guess, it's changing. I've read this thing over 5 times and I'm thinking different things...but now I'm reading it, and I'm thinking it's my heart? Hmm, that's my guess. It's my heart inside you. Am I right?

bamboosticks September 23 2005, 22:49:08 UTC

DING DING DING! Amazing! And you say you don't understand my poetry. This poem is a metaphor for the heart inside me. That was awesome. Way to go.

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too_many_morons September 23 2005, 14:58:36 UTC

Jessaline?

bamboosticks September 23 2005, 22:44:20 UTC

nope, thanks for trying though.

sussie08a September 23 2005, 16:29:59 UTC

MEEE?!?!

haha, I had to.

PEACE.

bamboosticks September 23 2005, 22:46:12 UTC

You wish. Nah but good guess.