Comments | bamboosticks: I'm Brilliant, Now Leave Me Alone

bamboosticks

I'm Brilliant, Now Leave Me Alone

Nov 08, 2005 20:07

Hi guys. With school work and all the other stuff going on right now I haven't had much time to write updates and such about what's going on with my life. I'm sorry to disappoint. But I've written another poem, this was the one on a friend's comp, and hopefully the posting of this will be enough to satiate your appetites. I'm still alive and I'll ( Read more... )

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leafy_girl November 8 2005, 17:35:25 UTC

Hi. I don't know a lot about poetry, but I read it twice. I love it!

bamboosticks November 9 2005, 08:42:04 UTC

I'm glad you liked it Leafy, it might be a different medium but it's still great to get a compliment from a fellow writer. Keep up the good work with your novel.

fibbleswings November 8 2005, 19:24:46 UTC

We'll probably talk before you read this.

But oh man, I think this is one of my favorite poems. I don't quite know what it is...maybe the fact that I have no idea what to make of it. It's really good, I like the sort of darkness it has to it. It's....captivating

bamboosticks November 9 2005, 08:44:02 UTC

It is a pretty confusing poem, and I like that about it. But I'm really happy that you like it so much. Yeah, it was interesting try to get it to have a hint of darkness to it but not so much that it's dramatic and over the top. It's cool that it had such an effect on you.

lorn_hecate November 8 2005, 19:26:23 UTC

Hey buddy!

I like it, and you know I'm not one to bullshit.

How's Harvard treatin' ya? I heard a rumour that you weren't loving it all too much but since you tend to make the best of most situations, I'm sure you're alright.

Hit me back, just to chat.

Truly yours,
your biggest fan
this is Stan

bamboosticks November 9 2005, 08:45:18 UTC

Knowing your dislike for bullshit it is is great to hear that you like it. Harvard is goin well, it's hard but I'm managing well. I've made a good circle of friends now and I'm starting to fit in, now I'm just worried about the work. But I'm sure you can relate. We'll chat soon, promise.

singergrl99 November 8 2005, 20:13:46 UTC

wow, I love this poem. It's so beautiful. Very sensual....haha, but seriously, definitely one of my favs.....

I STILL MISS YOU!
-Sylvia Dahling

bamboosticks November 9 2005, 08:46:21 UTC

Wow, I really seem to have struck a nerve with this poem. Glad you liked it Sylvia, anything to get your sensual thoughts all revved up. Thanks for the compliment.

too_many_morons November 9 2005, 14:43:11 UTC

that was so awesome! definetely my fav. until the wipe the blood from my mouth part. what was that all about?

bamboosticks November 9 2005, 17:24:09 UTC

Hehe, way to take one line too literally. It's meant to be a metaphor for hiding something unattractive, whatever, it's hard to explain, just don't take it too seriously.