I'd like to post a comment, I'm just not sure what to say.
This is a beautifully screwed up piece, not unlike how the books are, and it fits the tone of the books (I think. I suck when it comes to figuring out tone). Weirdly enough, I like how Katniss is portrayed as slightly heartless, and just going through the motions, trying to please Snow. I also like how she allowed them to augment her body. It sort of physically shows all the psychological trauma throughout the books, and I like that it takes over ten years for her hair to finally get back to normal. It sort of reflects how long it takes to heal, if you ever do.
This is perfection. It is so twisted and yet so beautiful ... they still grow back together, I think. And the babies with the different dads was a nice touch.
This is very messed up but very well written. I love that you've written it as, essentially, a calm recitation of facts, because once those facts sink in, it becomes just that much more horrifying.
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This is a beautifully screwed up piece, not unlike how the books are, and it fits the tone of the books (I think. I suck when it comes to figuring out tone). Weirdly enough, I like how Katniss is portrayed as slightly heartless, and just going through the motions, trying to please Snow. I also like how she allowed them to augment her body. It sort of physically shows all the psychological trauma throughout the books, and I like that it takes over ten years for her hair to finally get back to normal. It sort of reflects how long it takes to heal, if you ever do.
I may come back later with more thoughts.
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Thank you for sharing.
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