Soleil

Feb 28, 2012 12:50

Title: Soleil 
Pairing: Changmin/Sooyoung
Rating: PG
Genre: Drama

The moon is bleeding. )

fandom: dbsk, length: one-shots, fandom: snsd, genre: drama, pairing: sooyoung/changmin

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aoza February 28 2012, 06:39:40 UTC
I think I may still have a hung over from pulling an all-nighter but this was nice. ^^

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bamthegreat February 29 2012, 13:07:28 UTC
was the plot obvious? :))

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aoza March 1 2012, 10:29:53 UTC
Yeah. Pwede na :)

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bamthegreat March 1 2012, 17:01:56 UTC
sige nga ano nangyari? :))

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wintercreamed February 28 2012, 06:43:31 UTC
Won't deny it, your skills at writing unnie are just amazing. I love the descriptions, such clear imagery.

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bamthegreat February 29 2012, 13:10:14 UTC
Now that you've mentioned about clear imagery, what do you think happened in the fic? :D

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wintercreamed March 1 2012, 04:48:49 UTC
I'll be making guesses now. nakakahiya sayo. :)

The moon reminded her of him, and the first time they were together in his car and... yes, things happened. Sooyoung still regrets that night and she hated him for it, somehow even when he gave a ring. And why was she holding her tummy? Could it be that...

:)) Anyway, this was great. :D

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bamthegreat March 1 2012, 05:34:19 UTC
bangag ako nung isang gabi. sorry lynde ;A;
ksalfmklasmfkl she's holding her tummy because she is hungry hahaha

/mukhang bangag pa rin ako/

thank you for reading this lynde. kahit di mo OTP. i am really grateful. ♥

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falsefallacy February 28 2012, 16:33:31 UTC
Makapal ako kasi hindi ako na-boggle sa symbolisms X"P Labyu ate Bam! Ganito ka magsulat always ha?

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bamthegreat February 29 2012, 13:22:51 UTC
ayoko. haha. :))
ganito lang ako pag walang magawa hahaha

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falsefallacy February 29 2012, 13:52:28 UTC
Hirapan mo naman ang symbolisms sa susunod! Hahahahaha! JOKE LANG. XP

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bamthegreat February 29 2012, 14:27:06 UTC
HIHIHIHIHILASA UIE! HAHAHA
jasdsanafnsknfakns ahalabshoo :P

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paperwwings March 2 2012, 17:26:23 UTC
BAM UNNIE! WHAT IS THIS HEARTWRENCHING DRABBLE!!
They did the deed but he turned his back on her, is that it??
Or was it that he loved someone else but had sex with Soo because he was rejected and knew Soo's feelings for him?
OH THE POSSIBILITIES UNNIE!
YOU
ARE
KILLING
ME!!!

But! It's a compliment :)
I don't tell you this enough but you got to know you have a talent with words and plots unnie, one that I love so much!
But most of all, I LOVE U UNNIE!!!!

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bamthegreat March 2 2012, 17:37:51 UTC
I LOVE U TOO! and homg, the sister-comment of this reply is on your latest one-shot. As of now, I will explain the story to you :D

I never had a clear plot on what happened but it is determined that something happened between Changmin and Sooyoung resulting in Syoo's pregnancy (and later abortion).

Though what played on my mind when I wrote this was that, Syoo was obviously in love with Changmin and Changmin knew that. He sorta made use of Syoo's feelings. And then, it happened. It's a bit complicated actually. it's supposed to be consensual sex on changmin's pov but Sooyoung saw it as rape esp because she has invested her feelings. Note that she considered it rape when Min did not rise up to his responsibility (he got her pregnant). There's also an abortion that happened along the way (symbolized by her touching her belly but putting her hand down before she can actually do it). It is also safe to assume that Sooyoung never wanted to abort the baby but the company (or the people around her) made her do it and she's lashing out the ( ... )

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flow19 March 3 2012, 02:25:04 UTC
Now brain is working trying to figure out the symbolisms. I think I was able to figure out the general idea of the whole fic though. Haha! Great one shot, unnie! It's awesome to read a new fic from you again!

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bamthegreat March 10 2012, 11:38:49 UTC
Tenchu bella bb! ;________; y u always nice?
tigang na ang utak ko. kelangan ko ng inspiration ;A;

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