Oh Sehun, newestslashyoungest member of Alpha Kappal Muks
Interuniversity Marine Biologists Association (aka IMBA)
SHET. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
He shines more than the LED lights fencing the stage where Chanyeol’s band, Not Talking to Your Dad, was performing. He shines brighter than the glimmering mini-disco balls plated on the lead vocalist, Kyungsoo’s, shirt. He shines too much Sehun has to put ice packs around his eyes that night because he has strained every optical nerve of his from all the stolen glances he had thrown his way.
that vivid image of sehun thinking of luhan in this part... :) *cringe *cringe
sabog ka sa lagay na ni? grabe ang mga terms na imu gigamit bah. nosebleed ko gamay. hahahaha
adik. hahaha yaoi na rated g and pg. ayaw nang naay smut/nc. dili kaayo ko nagabasa ug ana. XD
mangitag skog ayos na prompt. hehehe
kani
"Imagine your otp arguing about who’s better in bed. After Person A insists that they are, Person B leans forward and says “Prove it.” Person A generously complies." JOKE LANG. HAHAHAHAHA pero kung okay sa imu ni, sookris unta XD
hello! i...am not sure if i'm allowed to leave a comment ;; but a friend recommended this fic (not to me, directly, but i just saw her tweet about it) so i checked this out and i'm glad that i read it because i enjoyed this very much!
i am really amused and at the same time, amazed(!!) at how you can combine beautiful metaphors and humor so flawlessly ;w;
uhm this may sound rude of me but i just would like to tell you (and i have no idea how to say this politely...) that i... was taken aback by the xi luhan part ;~~; xi is not luhan's surname; it's lu. ;~~~; i believe it's just common courtesy(????) to point this out to you ;;
and p.s. i know this may sound weird but i have been admiring you from afar because of many things that i am too shy to mention ( // u \\ ) and i am really really happy that you got to write an exo (yaoi!!!! sehan!!!!) fic! ♥
wth, ofc you're allowed to leave a comment! sdnsakfnkanfa stahp it you :'3 amused is enough xD and thank youuuu for taking time to read this, bb
PS. thanks for pointing out the xi luhan. :D don't fret. i don't think it's rude. in fact, i'm very thankful that you've mentioned this or else i might be using this again (on some other platform, maybe) and then someone would be a little less polite than you and point it out to me rather rudely ^^; so thank youuu
PPS. ajksdfnjkfnal no admiring pls huuu just... world without strangers mantra ok? xD
thank you once again for taking time to read this ;~~~~~~~~~~; ♥♥♥
lol that was so cute and silly heeheehee~ very nice and i like the other characters in there too ^^ like yixing, junmyeon, minseok, zitao, basically all the other members XDDDDD lol at jongin making out with kyungsoo at the end but freakin' sehun and luhan were super adorable and cute and everything XDDD :DDDD
I just died in so many parts of this fanfic. The Alpha Kapal Mukks fraternity, IMBA, Luhan's FAVORITE BONSAI, the way you portrayed Kris (a.k.a. long lost brother of mine) and how he's mentioned countless times, the KaiSoo, and how Xiumin was beating up Lay and Suho at the end of the fic. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Like what I said in Twitter, this fic oddly reminds me so much of UP. The story's entertaining, refreshing, really natural in a sense like I can imagine this happening in real life. The kind of yaoi I'll be willing to read anytime XD
Great read, unnie! Really, really happy to read a new fanfic from you again :D
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CUTE KAAYO SIYA. HSGKAHDGKAHGDAKJDGAKDGAH
Oh Sehun, newestslashyoungest member of Alpha Kappal Muks
Interuniversity Marine Biologists Association (aka IMBA)
SHET. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
He shines more than the LED lights fencing the stage where Chanyeol’s band, Not Talking to Your Dad, was performing. He shines brighter than the glimmering mini-disco balls plated on the lead vocalist, Kyungsoo’s, shirt. He shines too much Sehun has to put ice packs around his eyes that night because he has strained every optical nerve of his from all the stolen glances he had thrown his way.
that vivid image of sehun thinking of luhan in this part... :) *cringe *cringe
Diabetes-inducing fluff talaga siya. XD
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sabog kaayo ko tong gihimo nako ni bah. mas lingaw man diay magsulat ug yaoi noh? hahahaha sige ken, himuan takag krishan pero hatagi kog prompt :D
thanks sa pagbasa, budat. :D
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adik. hahaha yaoi na rated g and pg. ayaw nang naay smut/nc. dili kaayo ko nagabasa ug ana. XD
mangitag skog ayos na prompt. hehehe
kani
"Imagine your otp arguing about who’s better in bed. After Person A insists that they are, Person B leans forward and says “Prove it.” Person A generously complies." JOKE LANG. HAHAHAHAHA pero kung okay sa imu ni, sookris unta XD
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anyway, ayaw nang smut pero kung makahatag ug prompt!hahahahak njakjsdnsakfgnsjknaljdgsnfjknjkd IGATAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHA
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i am really amused and at the same time, amazed(!!) at how you can combine beautiful metaphors and humor so flawlessly ;w;
uhm this may sound rude of me but i just would like to tell you (and i have no idea how to say this politely...) that i... was taken aback by the xi luhan part ;~~; xi is not luhan's surname; it's lu. ;~~~; i believe it's just common courtesy(????) to point this out to you ;;
and p.s. i know this may sound weird but i have been admiring you from afar because of many things that i am too shy to mention ( // u \\ ) and i am really really happy that you got to write an exo (yaoi!!!! sehan!!!!) fic! ♥
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wth, ofc you're allowed to leave a comment! sdnsakfnkanfa
stahp it you :'3 amused is enough xD and thank youuuu for taking time to read this, bb
PS. thanks for pointing out the xi luhan. :D don't fret. i don't think it's rude. in fact, i'm very thankful that you've mentioned this or else i might be using this again (on some other platform, maybe) and then someone would be a little less polite than you and point it out to me rather rudely ^^; so thank youuu
PPS. ajksdfnjkfnal no admiring pls huuu just... world without strangers mantra ok? xD
thank you once again for taking time to read this ;~~~~~~~~~~; ♥♥♥
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very nice and i like the other characters in there too ^^ like yixing, junmyeon, minseok, zitao, basically all the other members XDDDDD
lol at jongin making out with kyungsoo at the end
but freakin' sehun and luhan were super adorable and cute and everything XDDD :DDDD
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/gives you cookies
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thanks for dropping by, bb. :D
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I just died in so many parts of this fanfic. The Alpha Kapal Mukks fraternity, IMBA, Luhan's FAVORITE BONSAI, the way you portrayed Kris (a.k.a. long lost brother of mine) and how he's mentioned countless times, the KaiSoo, and how Xiumin was beating up Lay and Suho at the end of the fic. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Like what I said in Twitter, this fic oddly reminds me so much of UP. The story's entertaining, refreshing, really natural in a sense like I can imagine this happening in real life. The kind of yaoi I'll be willing to read anytime XD
Great read, unnie! Really, really happy to read a new fanfic from you again :D
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i just can't help putting kris in the story hahahaha kjsnafkjnfdka from now on, he shall be known as "long lost brother of bella" =))))
btw, i am happy that it reminds you of UP. care to share why? :D
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