Title: The Toy Crown Incident
Author:
bananacosmic Author's Email: bananacosmicgirl@hotmail.com
Author's Home Page:
CosmicUniverse.net Fandom: How I met your mother
Word count: 6 000
Chapters: Oneshot
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance
Characters: Ted, Barney, Lily, Robin, Marshall
Pairings: Ted/Barney
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: This story is
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Comments 25
Your writing is, once again, completely overwhelming and so very good.
What I love the most about this is Barney. How it is so obvious that he is very much in love but the word isn't ever pronounced (even in Ted's head). How he is silent and gives Ted an out. Yep, the angst whore in me loved him here. :))
I also adored the part where Lily reminded Ted not to hurt Barney. (I was struck with a flashback to Beyond the Illusion. :)) And how she was excited... Well, to wrap it up, you wrote awesomest Lily.
Oh, and the drunkenness! I don't really know but I could guess that it's not the easiest thing to write drunk people - or is it? Dunno. But I really liked how you did that; they were really believable. And 'Shatsky'! *g*
Now onto the quotes and some more ramble-ramble.
Why the hell were they naked together in bed?
Never mind, don’t answer that, he screamed at his brain.
LOVED THIS PART. xDDD
“I don’t base my choice of girlfriends on their ( ... )
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Anyway, I'm very happy you liked it! :D I haven't written Ted/Barney before but this wrote itself. I also love silent, suffering Barney, so I'm glad that came across.
I'll appreciate a review for Beyond the Illusion, if you feel like it, of course - otherwise I'll be happy just knowing you've read it and enjoyed it. And I hope you enjoy Becoming once you have time to read it.
You wrote such a long and nice review and I don't know how to respond with equal length, but your comment put a huge smile on my face :D Thank you!
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Ted wondered if is should feel weird to be cuddling with Barney
'it'?
Also, didn't mention this the first time, but GUH LOVE.
Ted hated only a little how un-Barney Barney was being. All quiet, with soft blue eyes gazing at Ted with-
Oh, Ted was so not going there. He saw nothing in Barney’s eyes. Nothing. Nothing, nothing, nothing!
Yeah, the thing is that I do feel like it. :D
You don't have to! You're the author. I'm glad that it did. :)
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Barney remembered all along
:D
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This was darling, mah dear! and I really should get around to writing an epic review for your 'becoming' story which was such a delightful little fic. :D
Thank you for contributing to the far too small pool of Barney/Ted fics! <3333
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Heh. And here I thought hardly anyone was reading that thing.
Thank you :) I'll try to contribute some more!
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