Fic: The Toy Crown Incident (NC-17, 1/1, Ted/Barney, HIMYM)

Apr 13, 2010 17:13

Title: The Toy Crown Incident
Author: bananacosmic

Author's Email: bananacosmicgirl@hotmail.com
Author's Home Page: CosmicUniverse.net

Fandom: How I met your mother
Word count: 6 000
Chapters: Oneshot
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance
Characters: Ted, Barney, Lily, Robin, Marshall
Pairings: Ted/Barney

Warnings: None
Spoilers: None

Disclaimer: This story is ( Read more... )

fanfic, fandom: himym, slash

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veritty April 13 2010, 16:52:12 UTC
Oh, it was amazing. <3 (Today's a really good day in fandom sense. Wonder why this is.)

Your writing is, once again, completely overwhelming and so very good.

What I love the most about this is Barney. How it is so obvious that he is very much in love but the word isn't ever pronounced (even in Ted's head). How he is silent and gives Ted an out. Yep, the angst whore in me loved him here. :))

I also adored the part where Lily reminded Ted not to hurt Barney. (I was struck with a flashback to Beyond the Illusion. :)) And how she was excited... Well, to wrap it up, you wrote awesomest Lily.

Oh, and the drunkenness! I don't really know but I could guess that it's not the easiest thing to write drunk people - or is it? Dunno. But I really liked how you did that; they were really believable. And 'Shatsky'! *g*

Now onto the quotes and some more ramble-ramble.

Why the hell were they naked together in bed?

Never mind, don’t answer that, he screamed at his brain.

LOVED THIS PART. xDDD

“I don’t base my choice of girlfriends on their ( ... )

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veritty April 13 2010, 16:53:31 UTC
HTML fail. Or rather my fail at HTML. Or rather my habit of writing first the ending, then something in the middle, then the bit at the beginning, then more in the middle, then the very beginning... Yeah.

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bananacosmic April 13 2010, 17:02:59 UTC
*g* No worries. And do point out the typo. I've gone over it, but I tend to miss stuff.

Anyway, I'm very happy you liked it! :D I haven't written Ted/Barney before but this wrote itself. I also love silent, suffering Barney, so I'm glad that came across.

I'll appreciate a review for Beyond the Illusion, if you feel like it, of course - otherwise I'll be happy just knowing you've read it and enjoyed it. And I hope you enjoy Becoming once you have time to read it.

You wrote such a long and nice review and I don't know how to respond with equal length, but your comment put a huge smile on my face :D Thank you!

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veritty April 13 2010, 17:07:49 UTC
Ah, it's a small thing.

Ted wondered if is should feel weird to be cuddling with Barney
'it'?

Also, didn't mention this the first time, but GUH LOVE.

Ted hated only a little how un-Barney Barney was being. All quiet, with soft blue eyes gazing at Ted with-

Oh, Ted was so not going there. He saw nothing in Barney’s eyes. Nothing. Nothing, nothing, nothing!

Yeah, the thing is that I do feel like it. :D

You don't have to! You're the author. I'm glad that it did. :)

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lewisme April 13 2010, 17:24:12 UTC
As far as I'm concerned, this is canon. Are you planning a follow-up? Please? I'd love to see them actually together around everyone else.

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tyhyin April 13 2010, 18:44:26 UTC
I concur will all of that!

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bananacosmic April 13 2010, 20:40:43 UTC
I don't have a follow-up planned, but who knows? At the moment, I'm working on an angst-heavy Ted/Barney fic, though, so I'll probably post more for this pairing :) Glad you liked it!

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tyhyin April 13 2010, 18:43:56 UTC
yeah this is good
Barney remembered all along
:D

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bananacosmic April 13 2010, 20:19:42 UTC
Of course he did *g* Thank you *hugs*

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lackadaisy April 13 2010, 19:49:48 UTC
Awww! Now if only /this/ is what had happened the night of the pineapple incident. ;3

This was darling, mah dear! and I really should get around to writing an epic review for your 'becoming' story which was such a delightful little fic. :D

Thank you for contributing to the far too small pool of Barney/Ted fics! <3333

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bananacosmic April 13 2010, 20:20:43 UTC
Agreed. It totally should've happened ^^

Heh. And here I thought hardly anyone was reading that thing.

Thank you :) I'll try to contribute some more!

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beautybecks April 13 2010, 20:02:16 UTC
This is so awesome. I love the detail, this really feels like it could be an episode. Your dialogue is amazing and perfectly in character. This whole fic is made of win. Thanks for sharing.

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bananacosmic April 13 2010, 20:21:23 UTC
Thank you very much *hugs* Glad it feels in character and everything :D

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