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NEWS drabbles [Set 14]

Oct 02, 2011 16:48

Title: Slow and Steady
Pairing: Koyama/Shigeaki
Rating: G
Original fic: 5 KoyaShige Dramas that Never Happened - Area Searched, No Trace for snowaltz
Summary: Koyama finally succeeds in making Shige smile.

( He still hadn’t gotten a smile out of him, but the flush on Shige’s cheeks was almost as good. )

x: au, c: masuda, c: tegoshi, p: koyama/yamapi, c: shigeaki, c: koyama, p: koyama/shigeaki, p: masuda/tegoshi, g: news, x: drabble, c: yamapi

Comments 22

kataomi November 10 2011, 04:15:06 UTC

Reflection ( ... )

rietje_1 November 24 2011, 23:01:56 UTC

Yay, lovely batch! ♥ And fic expansions, 'yes' to that too! It's fun seeing things from a different viewpoint after reading the original.

So many cute subtleties in the first one. How you managed to fit so many of them in and give so much information without it feeling crammed. It all fit perfectly in between hunting down a killer.

Shige as Shigemi and Koyama totally falling for it (and him - or is it her? Hmm), that totally cracked me up. So cute! Especially with Koyama liking everything that's not exactly attractive in Shige, because he likes the person.

Despite the sweet, calm feeling, what touched me most was this line:
Sometimes, not yet, he’s not quite ready yet - disgustinggoodfornothinglittlefaggotgetoutandnevercomeback - but maybe when he’s more, when he’s better than he is now, when he’s made something of himself, he’ll go back and show mom and dad that he’s someone they can be proud of.Beautiful and sad at the same time, and filled in the blanks. I mean, all of them do but this one in specific ( ... )