Palian and Rain Daisies

[bandit_dreams]

An impromptu story I wrote up on the spot in a strange place irc after the demand of "STORY!" was well, demanded. I rose up to the challenge gallantly. After being in a rather big creative slump I'm quite pleased with how it turned out despite having stumble through it all like an ogre with a swarm of angry bees up its nose

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[fifiwoofwoof]

Wow, such imagery! I thought I was saved from using that word again =P

You need to read Funes the Memorius, your story is like a pretty version of it !

There are a couple of sentences which need explaining a bit more, or need to be broken up into two sentences, but tis goodliness otherwise

[bandit_dreams]

Yeah, I realised after I forgot to explain why he had to keep going to the top. The closer to the top you pick your daisies, the higher the chance of getting your wish granted. But I was just churning stuff out, and when I came to a block I was like "stop freaking thinking and just write!" I had images (well, it was more like a mini movie type thing) in my head and I just wrote what I saw and felt (I guess I sort of removed myself...if that makes sense XD)

So many of my stories are tragic or really really bizarre.....