It's not new...and yet it feels like a bit of a rebirth to me. After a lot of thinking and false starts, I've finally gotten a handle on the complexities of Dante/Tasuki as well over my fear of being controversial as I'm writing. Before I felt as if I should apologize for Miaka wanting Dante, and vice versa...but no longer. It's life, and it happens for many reasons (albeit probably the ones Miaka and Dante share. *wry grin*)
Sorry, that was TMI. I'll be quiet now and get back to work. The brand new chapter is being written- I put a little excerpt of it on the MOK bio page.
P.S. *evil giggle* If Dante were real, would he be on your list with David Wenham? >:D
Okay, firstly, nice to see this story again ^____^. I like this chapter in general, and although Dante is kinda cool he'll never take the place of Tasuki *grins*... 'course, it's going to be fun once he starts remembering his time as Tasuki.
(I fangirl squeed at Tasuki wanting to toast Taka)
And that was Taitsukun (whose name I cannont spell) I saw, wasn't it *grins*
What the heck are those people going to do to Taka?
(Oh, in other news, I discovered that one of the Anime my friend gave me to "keep me sane in Poland" was.... Fushigi Yuugi! *cheers*. I've started watching from the beginning)
Feel free to nick that icon if you want it. I made it ages ago and just never posted it. I had to practically sit on it to get it down under the 40kb.
Yay! Multi-tasking! *nicks icon with one hand and brushes plaster dust off of you with the other* Or should that be...Multi- Tasuki-ing? *cues groans from the audience*
XD
I agree, Dante can't take the place of Tasuki. Although he's carrying Tasuki's legacy, he's definitely his own person. *Cue cheesey commercial announcer* 'He's Two! (snaps fingers) Two!(snaps) Two guys in one!!'(*)
*Tessen points to anyone who knows what product that slogan is for.
Thank you for the feedback, Sheena, it means a lot to me. It also gives me that much more motivation to finish Chapter 15! :D
Yays for rewatching FY!! Kind of funny to think that watching a Fantasy anime will be keeping you in the land of reality....:D
I love what you've done with Dante he is his own character and has all the deep connections to Tasuki, I love him to pieces. You're evolving this couple well, yes things don't always work out and people grow and change. Taka and Miaka meet when they were teenagers, people grow and change and its not tragic its life.
Your doing a great job with Miaka, and I like her self confendance with herself.
One small thing in the scence where Tasuki lies about his brain freeze Miaka didn't ask him a question, I think its missing a line. Yes I fangyrled with the toasted Taka thought:)
The flow of this story is amazing you've got the hawt smexyness, sweet concern, story intrigue and mystery, well blanced and it flows and makes you want to turn the page.
I adore this story I'm so happy the flame has rekindled.
One small thing in the scence where Tasuki lies about his brain freeze Miaka didn't ask him a question, I think its missing a line.
I wanted to mention and thank you for pointing this out! You're right, something was missing there; I missed it in my read over. (That's what happens when you act as your own beta. Can't see the forest for the trees, heh. =P ^_~) I think I've fixed it so it sounds okay- just have to go do the same on ff.net...^__^*
I love what you've done with Dante he is his own character and has all the deep connections to Tasuki, I love him to pieces.
Thank you so much!! :D One of the reasons this compliment is so dear to me is because Dante is both my brainchild, and sort of a trial to see if I can create the kind of romantic hero people want to read about in an original novel...^__~
You're evolving this couple well, yes things don't always work out and people grow and change. Thank you....^__
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OK, it's not really NEW material, but still... ;p
I like the tweaks.
And I almost like Dante more than Tasuki too. :D
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It's not new...and yet it feels like a bit of a rebirth to me. After a lot of thinking and false starts, I've finally gotten a handle on the complexities of Dante/Tasuki as well over my fear of being controversial as I'm writing. Before I felt as if I should apologize for Miaka wanting Dante, and vice versa...but no longer. It's life, and it happens for many reasons (albeit probably the ones Miaka and Dante share. *wry grin*)
Sorry, that was TMI. I'll be quiet now and get back to work.
The brand new chapter is being written- I put a little excerpt of it on the MOK bio page.
P.S. *evil giggle* If Dante were real, would he be on your list with David Wenham? >:D
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Remember, I spotted him once: In police uniform and everything!!! ;p
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Lol!! That's right!! :D Too bad you didn't have a camera...*waggles eyebrows*
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*bounces off the walls*
Will be more coherrant later.
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See you later then?
*enjoys Tasuki and tessen icon*
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Okay, firstly, nice to see this story again ^____^. I like this chapter in general, and although Dante is kinda cool he'll never take the place of Tasuki *grins*... 'course, it's going to be fun once he starts remembering his time as Tasuki.
(I fangirl squeed at Tasuki wanting to toast Taka)
And that was Taitsukun (whose name I cannont spell) I saw, wasn't it *grins*
What the heck are those people going to do to Taka?
(Oh, in other news, I discovered that one of the Anime my friend gave me to "keep me sane in Poland" was.... Fushigi Yuugi! *cheers*. I've started watching from the beginning)
Feel free to nick that icon if you want it. I made it ages ago and just never posted it. I had to practically sit on it to get it down under the 40kb.
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Or should that be...Multi- Tasuki-ing?
*cues groans from the audience*
XD
I agree, Dante can't take the place of Tasuki. Although he's carrying Tasuki's legacy, he's definitely his own person. *Cue cheesey commercial announcer* 'He's Two! (snaps fingers) Two!(snaps) Two guys in one!!'(*)
*Tessen points to anyone who knows what product that slogan is for.
Thank you for the feedback, Sheena, it means a lot to me. It also gives me that much more motivation to finish Chapter 15! :D
Yays for rewatching FY!! Kind of funny to think that watching a Fantasy anime will be keeping you in the land of reality....:D
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Your doing a great job with Miaka, and I like her self confendance with herself.
One small thing in the scence where Tasuki lies about his brain freeze Miaka didn't ask him a question, I think its missing a line. Yes I fangyrled with the toasted Taka thought:)
The flow of this story is amazing you've got the hawt smexyness, sweet concern, story intrigue and mystery, well blanced and it flows and makes you want to turn the page.
I adore this story I'm so happy the flame has rekindled.
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One small thing in the scence where Tasuki lies about his brain freeze Miaka didn't ask him a question, I think its missing a line.
I wanted to mention and thank you for pointing this out! You're right, something was missing there; I missed it in my read over. (That's what happens when you act as your own beta. Can't see the forest for the trees, heh. =P ^_~) I think I've fixed it so it sounds okay- just have to go do the same on ff.net...^__^*
I love what you've done with Dante he is his own character and has all the deep connections to Tasuki, I love him to pieces.
Thank you so much!! :D One of the reasons this compliment is so dear to me is because Dante is both my brainchild, and sort of a trial to see if I can create the kind of romantic hero people want to read about in an original novel...^__~
You're evolving this couple well, yes things don't always work out and people grow and change. Thank you....^__ ( ... )
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