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Sep 30, 2011 05:00

He'd tried this before, and he knew it didn't work. Wasn't the definition of insanity trying the same thing over and over expecting a different result? Nate smiled grimly and tried to lose himself in the burn of whiskey down the back of his throat.

“Nate.”Eliot's voice was tinny and thin from the ear piece, far away from his ear in his coat ( Read more... )

2011, fanfic: leverage

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anonymous September 30 2011, 16:52:44 UTC
Best! Way! Ever! thanks for answering my prompt and in three parts... You totally rock! Love it!

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bandwidth_limit September 30 2011, 18:11:58 UTC
Glad you liked it! I kinda feel like it wandered toward the end.

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acquariusgb September 30 2011, 22:02:52 UTC
Yeah, fantastic way to end it!!

Sophie Devereaux never made her exit until she was damn well ready to.
Loved this phrase!!

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bandwidth_limit September 30 2011, 22:19:22 UTC
I liked that part, too. :)

I was really worried about the ending! I knew how I wanted the last section to start, and then after I wrote that part, I kind of drew a blank on where to go from there.

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astridv October 1 2011, 14:37:58 UTC
I love Nate's POV... so intense, but not overdone!

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bandwidth_limit October 2 2011, 01:01:02 UTC
I'm glad it worked for you! I was a little concerned, to be honest. Nate doesn't come as easily to me as I wish he did.

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mystizan October 3 2011, 01:46:47 UTC
This whole series is so emotive! idek if I can tell u all I loved abt it. The team was IC, & being very much teamy, from Eliot threatening Nate, to Parker crying into Nate's neck, to Hardison trying to sound calm when asking after Sophie. & then Body language = Sophie & the breakdown _that_ almost caused in Nate...just...LOVELY.

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bandwidth_limit October 3 2011, 01:50:42 UTC
Thank you! I don't write chapter stories (for lack of a better word) very often anymore, and I was kind of concerned about this one. But, so far, the reactions have been very good. :D

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mystizan October 3 2011, 01:55:47 UTC
ur very welcome! It's well written :)

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wolfscape October 3 2011, 20:14:22 UTC
Nicely written, I enjoyed the suspense.

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bandwidth_limit October 4 2011, 15:40:09 UTC
Thanks! I tried not to drag it out for too long.

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