Trust is a Funny Thing, Chapter Nine

Aug 10, 2006 18:29

Author: Red, aka redscorner or bangelsoulloveTitle: Trust is a Funny Thing ( Read more... )

trust is a funny thing

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yay! momentofbored August 11 2006, 02:41:14 UTC
I loved the dialogue between Buffy and the Powers that be MADLY.

I am also a little bit in love with the fact that Angel was going to turn her rather than let her die... talk about a moment of devistated passion!

As usual! I eagerly await more! soon! and hope your night sparkles marvelous ;)

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Re: yay! bangelsoullove August 11 2006, 02:46:14 UTC
Oh my goddess, I love you! You're so sweet to leave feedback after you already read the chapter just cause I said I'm having a craptastic day. *hugs*

And thank you for the comment on the dialogue between TPTB and Buffy - I worked hard on that, I wanted Buffy to sound "true."

About Angel turning Buffy it came down to it, I've seen this debated a lot and I really think it's something he'd do. After losing her twice and everything else, I think if he were there to see her almost die a third time, he'd turn her in a moment of weakness.

*smooches you* I hope your night is fantabulous!

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I'm sorry! bangelsoullove August 11 2006, 02:49:37 UTC
I forgot to credit you for the beta, I'm so sorry! I went ahead and edited the entry to thank you for that.

Bad!fic writer, no cookie for me.

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Re: I'm sorry! tulosai August 11 2006, 19:42:02 UTC
Aw, whatever, in case you couldn't tell I wasn't exactly freaking out about it. Credit is nice but unnecessary... getting to read your kick ass fic before the rest of the world is thanks enough :P

Here's to hoping you update soon!

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x_spikeaholic_x August 11 2006, 02:42:55 UTC
AHHHHH BUFFY DIED! I loved it.

“So, what you’re saying is it’s Cordy’s fault I died? Figures,” she muttered. “She never did like me.”
That absolutely cracked me up. That was so perfect hahaha.

Great jobbb! :DDD

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bangelsoullove August 11 2006, 02:47:05 UTC
Thank you! I swear, you're one of the greatest feedbackers ever. I appreciate that, more than you'll realize. Especially today, it's been kind of a rough one.

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x_spikeaholic_x August 11 2006, 02:51:00 UTC
Aww I'm so glad. Sorry your day's been bad! I really mean it though, I love your writing. :)

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crystalsc August 11 2006, 02:52:06 UTC
interesting! i like you using Willow's mind communication trick! That always makes me think of Xander saying "Great googily-moogily!" LOL

So, are we gonna get some more good NC-17 lovin now?? :)

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bangelsoullove August 11 2006, 02:57:55 UTC
Eventually. I can't say more than that, or I'll give it all away. :)

Thanks for reading and for the feedback!

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maevebran August 11 2006, 09:28:00 UTC
Oh yeah. I'm gald buffy got to give the Powers a piece of her mind. I like how you worked the Pylea thing, the Mohra demon and everything in to some larger plan. Loved this chapter. But really 3 times? Someone needs to write the fic where Buffy really does have nine lives like a cat.

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bangelsoullove August 12 2006, 01:41:40 UTC
*giggle* that would pwn

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bangelsoullove August 12 2006, 01:44:21 UTC
Thank you! And yes, my little romantic heart was squeeing at that part. Which, you know, is kinda lame, since I wrote the damned thing...

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