days later i am back ;___; i really wanted to comment on this before reveals but i've been really swamped and i wanted to reread it before i commented to make sure i got to compliment you on everything i enjoyed ;;;;
djkasfd i love the group dynamics! i love the way that everyone talked to each other and the way you wrote their familiarity, the way they know each other so well and they're rude ( "Are we shit talking Seokjin?" I DIED HERE / "Also we basically breathe for the days you fuck up") but you still get a sense of support from them. i love the graduation scene (jin crying, JIN'S MOM) but especially the scene that follows, you really get a sense of rapmon's age. the way he's frantic to figure out when the picture was taken and his nervousness about being left behind. “I have plenty of time to be nervous. I’m stalling.” i love how "jin" this feels and he's sorry he can't take rapmon with him dgjdlksgsdkgj baaaaaaaaby THE WHOLE CABI BAY SCENE i love suga ditching them and namjin's awareness of each other's bodies and he honestly
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This was seriously so cute! I absolutely love Namjoon in this, and both his and Seokjin's ridiculous angsting, and how easily, in the end, they came to be together :3
AHSJ UDS Everything was cute, except for hangovers that's not cute, or comeing in your pants that sounds like a mess
But like Jimin and Jungkook buying too many snacks and Taehyung being awake at six in the morning and Yoongi being the most unhelpful person ever and Hoseok shouting "Paint me like one of your french girls" and of course Nam Joon and Seokjin overthinking things when all they needed was talk and yeah...
i liked the group road trip feeling of this, and the way namjoon and seokjin sort of dance around each other until the very end - it felt realistic, in a way. everyone's dialogue is so cute! i want to squish your suga :> thank you for this!
i've decided that bangtan going on any kind of trip together is my favourite thing also lOUD YELLING I LOVE THIS. THIS WAS REALLY GOOD? GREAT? AMAZING?
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djkasfd i love the group dynamics! i love the way that everyone talked to each other and the way you wrote their familiarity, the way they know each other so well and they're rude ( "Are we shit talking Seokjin?" I DIED HERE / "Also we basically breathe for the days you fuck up") but you still get a sense of support from them. i love the graduation scene (jin crying, JIN'S MOM) but especially the scene that follows, you really get a sense of rapmon's age. the way he's frantic to figure out when the picture was taken and his nervousness about being left behind. “I have plenty of time to be nervous. I’m stalling.” i love how "jin" this feels and he's sorry he can't take rapmon with him dgjdlksgsdkgj baaaaaaaaby THE WHOLE CABI BAY SCENE i love suga ditching them and namjin's awareness of each other's bodies and he honestly ( ... )
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But like Jimin and Jungkook buying too many snacks and Taehyung being awake at six in the morning and Yoongi being the most unhelpful person ever and Hoseok shouting "Paint me like one of your french girls" and of course Nam Joon and Seokjin overthinking things when all they needed was talk and yeah...
I loved this so much <3
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