give me more, for sasireun

[bangtanmod]

Title: Give Me More
Recipient: sasireun
Pairing: Suga/Jimin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: [spoilers]Alpha/omega dynamics. Consensual sex during heat. Knotting. (Every A/B/O cliche except mpreg ///o\\\)
Summary: Jimin's first heat comes as a surprise.
Notes: At the end! (2700 words)

Comments

[seulpeo]

DIES I NEVER THOUGH I COULD HAVE A/B/O IN THIS FANDOM IN THIS LIFE THANK YOU

[seulpeo]

;~~~~~~~~~~; this was so amazing i never knew how badly i wanted omega!jimin in heat until i actually got it but now i cant! think of anything else!! i love a/b/o au so much!?!?

It's not in Yoongi's nature to run from anything, but for a moment, as Jimin approaches him, it looks like he might follow Jungkook's lead. He doesn't.
cry your characterization was so good. yoonmin is so good. i love how your yoongi is so sharp and fearless but jimin knows him well enough to spot the softness in his expressions, thats really lovely and adds that extra layer on top of what looks like its just heatsex. BUT ITS NOT BC THERE ARE FEELINGS WHIMPERS

"Don't get all girly on me," Yoongi says, and kisses him.
;_; ;_; like he wants to comfort jimin for his embarrassment about being so wet!! but this is the only way he knows how to say it!!! (((also wet!jimin bye life)

Jimin whines, because he's still hard and impatient and wants to get fucked and now isn't the time for Yoongi to get lazy.
gUH

"Shit," Yoongi says, fingertips digging into Jimin's

[sasireun]

I DIDN'T EVEN ASK FOR KNOTTING PORN SPECIFICALLY (tho... i guess i wouldn't know what else would come under a/b/o fic but i was thinking pretty chill, cuddly, possessive thoughts at the time lol) i didn't even think this prompt would be the one chosen by my assigned writer wah

[seulpeo]

well you prompted a/b/o tbh that is enough for me to extend a hand out to you and shed tears of happiness

[sasireun]

WRITER-NON I'M SO RED IN THE FACE RIGHT NOW

ok honestly i didn't check to see what else i wrote down in my requests and this was one of the only prompts i remembered because it was a specific theme/au/ar BUT I DIDN'T EXPECT THIS TO GET WRITTEN AT ALL and it's jimin & first heat & knotting and hahahahahaha. ha. excuse me while i cry a puddle of tears at your feet

Every part of his body is telling to kneel, to submit to the alpha, but Jimin's never been too good at the whole omega thing anyway.
;~~~~~~; ok the characterisation is a+ in my eyes ok. i really liked the way you wrote jimin and i like that he still has it in his mind to get what he wants instead of just follow yoongi's orders just because he's an alpha and just. sob jimin not being that great at being an omega let me cry tears

He knows what Yoongi wants. Jimin can smell it now, the undercurrent of something softer, sweeter, but he can see more clearly than ever on Yoongi's face- in the furrow of his brow, the way he licks his lips- how much he wants this too.this is one

[staygame]

CRIES i'm sorry this is such a late response but I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT AND DIDN'T THINK I WAS SPYING ON YOU ON TWITTER all these nice compliments T__T ♥

[staygame]

ahhh that's a big honor ;A; i have a ton of thoughts about this whole universe so hopefully i will revisit it in the future!!! thank you for commenting.

[shrdmdnssftw]

I think I just died. A/b/o is one of my favourite things but it's also one that's really hard to get right but this is so good like *_________*

I don't actually know to express myself re: this fic except that it's hot and well written and contains all my favourite parts of A/b/o tropes as well as all my favourite parts of Yoongi/Jimin and basically just ahhhh I really liked this!

[staygame]

thank you so much for reading and i'm glad you liked it!!! it's nice to hear i got it right because a/b/o can go very wrong very easily imo so i worried a lot /o\

[causeitsred]

can i just--

i read this last night and today the entire day at work when i was zoning out my mind kept coming back to this and i realised how much i secretly enjoy a/b/o...........given i've not read a lot of it before but now that it is yoonmin i just--

(((also because needy submissive jimin is just about my secret favourite thing ever)))

also, knotting. and also stupid giggly lame jimin after sex ughaskjdhkjas dumbfuck qtpie

thank you so much for writing and thank you sasireun for requesting it ♥♥♥

[staygame]

needy jimin is also my favorite thing. it should be everyone's favorite thing and they should write more of it.

ehehe thank you for commenting ♥ i am glad you enjoyed it!