First fic?! D: *shock horror*

Jan 16, 2011 23:33

 Title: [one-shot? /drabble? /I have no idea?] “Absence makes the heart grow fonder” - English Proverb.
Author: Moi (: 
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pg-16, akame, fanfiction

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kaykm January 16 2011, 23:49:51 UTC
i wonder what the toddler had exactly seen akame was doing.*grins* i hope not the visions i have in mind...i pity his innocent eyes, if ever. haha!

i think i love this! would u believe i just said that? XDDD

seriously, i love it! the scenes are just right for the plot of the drabble. i was hoping they're gonna make out for real in that lounge.*grins*

great job on your 1st fic ever!*throws confetti*

there ~ i didn't say anything to diminish your self-esteem, sweetie.XDDD

***huggles***

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bankai_babe January 17 2011, 20:22:29 UTC
Haha, too much, trust me, that toddler saw, too much. (lucky thing xD)
Why would I not believe it (apart from the fact it's my crappy first posting xD) Are you more of a Pin fan dear? D: xD
Haha, maybe one day I will write something to shock you all! (yay for smut! >.<)
Aww Kay-chan I do love you >.< you are so good to me (: ~
x

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kaykm January 17 2011, 21:49:15 UTC
i wish i were the toddler then..haha!

oh no Pin puhlease!!! im no fan of the pairing!!! just akame, ryoda, & yunjae..those are the only pairings that i ship. well..tomapi, as long as P is the seme.*grins*

~ because i love u just the same dear.♥

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bankai_babe January 17 2011, 22:57:31 UTC
Lol!

Phew! I was scared then! Haha AKame for the win! >.<
Any other pairings are like blasphemy! haha. xD
Pi could never be uke in any pairing! It just isn't right, he is too manly xD Ohhh have you seen his new PV yet? Where he is in a sparkly suit? I <3 it! (:

<3 (:

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queen_kat_tun January 17 2011, 07:44:32 UTC
Omaigosh, Jenn!!! This is freaking awesome even if it's short! I feel so deprived of awesome scenes though *shot* You should write akame fics! You're good &hearts

I like how you give focus on Jin's thoughts. They sound realistic enough to me and well, it's sweet! Omaigahd, Kameeee~~ *whistles*

I love this! :DDDDD

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bankai_babe January 17 2011, 20:29:05 UTC
Aww Queeny! You are too kind! >.<
Haha, you of all people should know I'm too lazy to write lots xD Maybe if I get a really good idea and very bored(:
Such kind words, maybe I will stop being a scaredy cat and actually post it to some fic communities? (That would mean I'd have to unfriend-lock it! D: )
aww thanks! I did try hard to make Jin's thoughts as accurate sounding as possible(:

eee! *hugs* You can always make me smile! :D x

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fazlyn_n January 17 2011, 13:10:01 UTC
This awesome...
Short but intrigue...

Definitely will be looking more from you...
thanks for sharing this awesome fic...
I LOVE IT

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bankai_babe January 17 2011, 20:31:21 UTC
Thank you! :D I'm so pleased you like it! >.<
I'm a bit lazy to write consistently but I will try hard! Thank you for the comment! Means the world to me ~ (: x

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quiet_houses January 17 2011, 20:44:26 UTC
^_^ hehehe, I'm glad I was a part of your first fic, although, like I said before, coulda done with more sex... but that's what we say about every situation >.<
But this is gorgeous, and I feel privileged to have read it first xxxxxxx

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bankai_babe January 17 2011, 20:49:11 UTC
Aww! *glomps!* I do love you babs!
One day I will blow your mind with my kinky-ness! (In fic form that was not a come-on, although(; ) *cough* yeah xD
I <3 our ff related antics, they shall continue forevaaaa :DDD

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moon_catcher April 12 2011, 21:12:07 UTC
Remember commenting will fill your dreams with AKame smut and not commenting will burn your bacon. HAVE TO COMMENT......... NEED AKAME DREAMS....... HAVE TO COMMENT......

Ano~ What to say and not leave you only with "ILU"??? O___o
It's great, really!!
I love the very beginning, it's simply yet well described and the image of a little boy trying to bring his mother's attention to *cough*something*cough* but being too late.... the desperate need of Kame and Jin finally meeting each other..... and omg NOW I'm curious how they managed to find an actual EMPTY corner when the whole airport scene seems to be one big mess lol ... but well, Akame, they ALWAYS find a way how to be together, ne? XDD

and lol hand up for the smiley to be added to the very end because that would exactly describe my expression after finishing reading :)

Sooooooo... can I have the promised dream now??? *puppy eyes*

stalked you from Queen-chan's lj and will try to catch your next work

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bankai_babe April 12 2011, 21:52:53 UTC
*Chokes with happiness* ahhh! Thank you for such a lovely comment!
Haha yeah I thought the airport may be a little inaccurate, seeing as I've never really been in one xD I was like "do airports have lounges...? Meh, they do now." XD
Haha, of course they will find a way, desperate times call for desperate measures :P
Lol! Hopefully my happiness will magically be enough for some kind of external AKame smut force to give you a good dream XD *crosses fingers*
Ah yes I beta stuff for Queen quite often, she's great :D I have so many ideas for more work but I'm lazy and have exams coming up, but hopefully I'll get the urge to write at some point >.<
*skips off happily*~

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moon_catcher April 13 2011, 12:31:38 UTC
lol @ your reaction
it was a standard comment xDD because I never know when shut up >.>
heh I have no idea how should an airport look like either, but the image of Kame and Jin finding a way how to escape from all the people around was just hilarious.....

Queen is one of not many people I read even though I should focus on school *shot* But it just can't be helped ♥
and now I'll even keep my fingers crossed for your school to be over soon and you could surrender to the urge to write xDD

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