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banyangirl1832

LJ Idol Week 8: No Comment

Feb 10, 2017 09:44

“So what’s your answer ( Read more... )

flash fiction, lj idol, poly

Comments 16

unmowngrass February 12 2017, 23:14:03 UTC

I like this. Well written.

sinnamongirl February 13 2017, 07:43:06 UTC

That's a lot of emotion for such a short piece. Well done!

eeyore_grrl February 13 2017, 22:27:27 UTC

I can see the first steps into poly being sort of off-kilter. The emotion. Oi.

murielle February 14 2017, 18:01:43 UTC

I love how you led us to the last line. A very good read. Expertly crafted!

eternal_ot February 15 2017, 14:42:22 UTC

Ah! Well...I hope her fears turn unreal as soon as they get to know each other. I like the way you used the prompt and loved the first paragraph (amazing description, I re-read it a few times :))