Blue

[banyangirl1832]

Beverly always liked to get in the restaurant during the blue hour. The place was silent like church, with only the hum of the walk-ins to punctuate the quiet. When she breezed in, past the porter waiting for the early deliveries, the energy of the place was like walking into the ocean. It enveloped her. For a precious few minutes, there was

Comments

[shadowwolf13]

:)

[i_17bingo]

Intriguing! And well-described. I could feel every one of those sensations, as well as the emotions attached to them.

[eternal_ot]

Ah! The anticipation. I loved the line - "if you reached out with a feather and pushed, you'd get a completely new day." A nice read!

[rayaso]

I loved the anticipation as well, and I enjoyed the description of the early morning hours of restaurant preparation.

[halfshellvenus]

I'm wondering who's about to visit her, and whether that someone is human!

Nice, vivid descriptions throughout.