Vendue

Mar 17, 2013 18:46

Title: Vendue
Pairing: Kai/Kyungsoo
Genre: G
Summary: He's cold, he's dying and he's nameless. Jongin will bring him home.
A/N: loosely inspired by shatter me and okane ga nai. this is holy shit word vomit and uhm an extreme failure for attempting to try to copy Tahereh Mafi's holy writing style but i suck and i kind of mixed my own style in this ( Read more... )

kai/kyungsoo, oneshot

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diokris March 17 2013, 16:06:24 UTC
wow this is beautiful

like

rly

beautiful

sobs

uhmm sequel pls?? bc you are osm and you cant just end it like this bc this is too great and i will love you forever if there is sequel <3333

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baoxiu March 18 2013, 01:42:46 UTC
omg thank you i really think this is horrible cries

yes i might make one but i have loads of crap to do but hey thank you for reading <3

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eexiee March 17 2013, 17:21:46 UTC
this was so lovely

just yeah it was gorgeous

you really gave an incredible in to Kyungsoo's mind

so nice

i want to read more

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baoxiu March 18 2013, 01:49:11 UTC
;A; i'm happy i kind of made Kyungsoo's point of view get into your minds lawd this was really a challenge so yeah omg thank you for reading!

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xxhna March 17 2013, 18:20:23 UTC
That was really interesting. Your description of everything had me playing everything as I read it through my head. .... part II? omgosh...I wonder where home is..

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baoxiu March 18 2013, 01:51:03 UTC
I wonder where home is..

omg that part kind of got me and now i suddenly have an idea for a sequel omg ;A; but i'm not sure if i can write it

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xxhna March 18 2013, 03:15:55 UTC
Aw you can do it! If its like this...then ohh man I'm already excited! Or honestly whatever comes after hehe

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baoxiu March 18 2013, 04:23:05 UTC
so u mean in this writing style? i'm thinking i might use jongin's point of view in the sequel though. because kyungsoo thinks differently to him and jongin has this dead feeling that i still don't know how to write cries but yes will work on this soon (after school works smh)

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daeseol March 18 2013, 06:07:52 UTC
cries at you jam cries at you omg

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baoxiu March 18 2013, 06:14:36 UTC
cries with you dan cries with you

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daeseol March 18 2013, 06:19:55 UTC

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baoxiu March 18 2013, 06:29:21 UTC
WIPES AWAY UR TEARS

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baoxiu March 19 2013, 07:41:37 UTC
i will try omg and btw, thank you for reading <3

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