Comments | bar_ohki: Veteran Advice (part 2), with an OMAKE

bar_ohki

Veteran Advice (part 2), with an OMAKE

Feb 14, 2011 14:48

Click here for part 1.

( Hiruma returned to Japan... )

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Comments 6

baka_sune February 15 2011, 16:36:34 UTC

gyahahahaa....clliford d'lewis a relationship wizard,,that's sure funny!

bar_ohki February 15 2011, 16:39:23 UTC

A very unwilling one too! XD

I'm glad this amused you! Always nice to see new readers.

cherry_tiger February 16 2011, 02:36:31 UTC

This one's a little sweeter than the other one you posted. There's a little bit of sentimentality here, especially with how both Hiruma and Mamori view their relationship.

Although I'm glad you kept the vengeance part intact here. XD Poor Clifford, he did his best to help, and he still got it from them. XD

bar_ohki February 16 2011, 02:52:47 UTC

Yeah, that's why I selected it for the prompt. It's sweeter, more serious, and feels a bit more realistic to me. Especially the part about the tried!Clifford threatening bodily harm.

That vengeance was for Clifford's bad habit of always having the last word. XD

immortalizepain February 16 2011, 10:10:23 UTC

Clifford playing matchmaker huh? Why is an inexperienced and insecure Hiruma cute?

bar_ohki February 16 2011, 14:30:40 UTC

The concept of putting Hiruma both out of his comfort zone and out of his area of expertise is what makes it cute.

And besides, Clifford playing matchmaker, unwillingly, is kind of funny.