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[edoriko]

back to you
xiuhan
pg; 5.2k
Luhan expects to find adventures in the forest outside his aunt and uncle's house. He finds Minseok; girl!minseok
-originally written for sncj_reversebb and posted here

Comments

[samsung43]

This was really nice. I don't know what exactly it is but it gave this warm, nice and sad feeling. Thank you for writing and sharing it :) Its great :)

[edoriko]

I'm glad that I could give you such a nice feeling from reading it. =u=

Thanks for reading and commenting~ ^o^

[lazyscrawls]

i love this so much
the ending was so bittersweet (he's so clueless i cry); and luhan's characterisation was so perfect
thank you for writing this!

[edoriko]

Poor Luhan has no idea that his playmate is really a tree spirit. ;u;

I'm happy that you found Luhan's characterization to be realistic. ^o^ Thanks for reading and commenting!

[charliebnim]

i have to say that for me this was a bit heartbreaking, at the same timee so sweet and pretty! thank you for writing... for me minseok was a fairy and later a guardian.... it was so clear how lonely Luhan felt .... this made me feel so fuzzy inside tho ! thank you!!!!

[edoriko]

I tried to balance out the sad with lots of fluff ;u;

even though I had intended Minseok to be a fairy/sprite all along I wanted to leave it a bit ambiguous so the reader could decide on their own what sort of role they wanted her to play. so you could see her as a fairy, a guardian angel, a friend, a childhood love, a child... c:

thank you for reading and commenting~ ^o^

[tokkai]

I loved this so much omg! I can just image Luhan coming back one day like 15 years later to find this massive crabapple tree and a pretty all grownup minseokkie waiting for him. Haha i can see him taking over his uncles farm juat to be near her.

This was so well written im not even kidding im bookmarking this it was so good. Thank you!!

[edoriko]

omg the image of that is so cute ;; I didn't want to write an epilogue bc I wanted to leave it a bit open but that's going to be the unofficial ending from now on. =u=

I just picture Luhan coming back after his uncle and aunt are too old to take care of the farm and he just walks into the woods and there she is, grown up and teasing him about going away as if only a day has passed and they explore the woods like old times except now their little discoveries are punctuated by kisses instead of childish grins. And later when he tries to figure out how to do things on the farm she watches in amusement, laughing when he gets the plow stuck in a ditch. Which of course just makes Luhan tackle her into the field as punishment, tickling her until she gives in and kisses him.

wow look at me going off like that... >///<

thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm really happy you enjoyed reading it. c:

[synonymous0230]

I still want Minseok to be a crab apple spirit that will become human if she finds her true love (｡+･`ω･´) Luhan will grow a crab apple tree in America and Minseok will get a transfer there (hah!) and Minseok will have to go to experience high school or college. aww ＜(。_。)＞

anyway, great fic!! thank you!! ( (ﾐ´ω`ﾐ))