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edoriko in baredreams

we are the stars that were swallowed up ( 0 / ? )

Feb 03, 2017 23:40

zero: the end of the world
sechen & xiubaek
pg; 2.5k
fantasy/magic realism
- post apocalypse!AU

( You don’t remember, Baekhyun always tells him, but that was the day the world ended. )

pairing: xiumin/baekhyun, pairing: sehun/chen, rating: pg, genre: au/ar, by: edori, length: chaptered, genre: fantasy, genre: post apocalypse, !fanfic

Comments 4

daybreakstorm February 3 2017, 21:16:07 UTC

Omg
Omg you write such amazing fics why are all of these so cool I need to read all of them

I totally didn't expect the soul thing woaH but that was really cool, and I love how jongdae wasn't even mad he was just impressed :') I wonder why Sehun didn't look to see Jongdaes true name? Unless it was some courtesy thing or something. Idk.

AhhhhhHhHHH I loved how you described Baekhyun and Minseok, how Baekhyuns world ended with the disaster, how Minseoks world ended with Baekhyun. It was so perfect and so them and I'm sobbing and I really hope Sehun gets them back

I mean, i guess the market being a living organism should have tipped me off to the fact that this isn't exactly a normal (??) Post-apocalyptic au ^^ I wonder if sechen can make it out alive :')

Your writing is amazing. I love how you make a world come to life and how it's so clearly seen from your characters point of view. Thank you for sharing this with us :D

edoriko February 5 2017, 15:15:12 UTC

Wow this was such a nice comment to get, thank you!! q u q

That's a good point lol... to be honest it didn't even occur to me that he could see Jongdae's name?! (whoops I forgot how lockets actually work??! o u o) BUT he probably has to close the locket as quickly as possible before the soul can escape, so I'm just gonna say that he doesn't have enough time to see the name anyway haha

Thanks again for commenting! = 3 =

richrychu February 7 2017, 12:44:34 UTC

I love it, this story is already so amazing! Wow. You have such a great way with words and this au is really enchanting and intriguing. This idea with catching souls made me so surprised! The way I imagine the market makes me scared, it's very weird in my head. And Xiubaek, I love this pairing so much <3 and I love their relationship in this fic

edoriko February 15 2017, 14:32:00 UTC

haha, I'm curious how you picture the market in your head! It should be kind of unsettling though, so that sounds about right o u o

Thanks so much for commenting! =3=