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Verse: Open
Word Count: 801
Note: Beta'd by the ever lovely mun of savagestime. First ever attempt at second person tense, and why yes, it is nonlinear and purposely disorganised.

It takes only a moment for you to have your gun in your hand

Comments

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[theguv]

Oh wow, that was amazing. Having it jumbled and out of order definitely makes it that much more frustrating and terrifying, as a reader, because you don't really know what's happening, you're constantly trying to make sense of it all, and I gather that's the same type of feeling going through the Brig's head. I really love how this was done. Absolutely fantastic.