SPN fic: Velocity

Nov 27, 2006 11:22

So, yeah, I wrote this just over a week ago when I was supposed to be finishing my portfolio for that darn MLS. It's just a weird angsty in-between piece that stemmed from the look on Dean's face when John was whispering to him in IMTOD and other odd Dean moments in Simon Said and Bloodlust. Also, having watched Simon Said would be helpful to ( Read more... )

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hinokumo November 27 2006, 20:46:42 UTC
Squeeomg! ::tackles:: Ok, first of all this one ripped out my heart and stomped on it. Poor Dean!

The pitches kept coming, sailing just over his unaware head with military precision.

That is an awesome metaphor for how vulnerable I think Dean feels, especially against other psychics. This is exactly what I'm afraid of happening and you captured Dean's fear and anger so perfectly. I do think he's a good soldier, I just don't know if he'd be able to do it since Sam is his world. Of course, if he did do it, I think he'd soon follow Sam. Gah. Angst, man. You have given me woobie!Dean and it is so good.

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barkeep November 27 2006, 23:22:17 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you liked it. :-)
Yeah, I have this fear that either John *did* or Sam *will* ask him to promise to take Sam out if he goes "dark side". And that would just ruin Dean - but if the alternative is letting Sam run amok? I just don't know what choice Dean would have. Dude. My chest hurts just thinking about it.

In other news, I promise (really!) to have the SGA fic up tomorrow-ish. And I'm working on a plotless Knife!Kink SPN fic that I hope to get done by the weekend. So, I'll try to keep you happy as you slave away...

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mgbutterfly November 28 2006, 00:13:58 UTC
I really like this. I have been one with the angst lately, things like this help me learn how to make it mine. In a good way. Is there a good way to angst? Dude.
So, yeah... Knife!Kink! I'm so excited!
~SQUEE~

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barkeep November 29 2006, 03:41:57 UTC
AFU
Thanks, smoox.

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barkeep November 29 2006, 03:43:28 UTC
It's true, Dean and I are drinking soul-mates. :->
Thanks for the introduction to the dark side... I like it here.

The whip! It hurts so good.
:-D

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