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'5 Minutes' Glee: Will/Rachel

Jun 10, 2010 17:03

Title: 5 Minutes
Author: baronessabba
Pairing,Character(s): Will/Rachel
Rating: PG-13 (?)
Word Count: 876
Spoilers: “Power of Madonna” (everything up to that)
Summary: Rachel is looking for someone to talk to after her date with Jesse. It doesn’t go at all like plannend.

Notes: I intended this as a one-shot. The story then got angsty and felt like part of ( Read more... )

will/rachel, angst, will schuester, glee, fanfiction, rachel berry

Comments 5

'5 Minutes' Glee: Will/Rachel wistfulwatcher June 10 2010, 15:57:32 UTC

Ouch. That was wonderful and oh, so, painful. Please do continue this (be it for more angst or, better yet, a little redemption). Thank you!

paynesgrey June 10 2010, 17:13:03 UTC

Wow, this was really dark and emotional, but it fit them perfectly. Fantastic job! Very enjoyable.

0penhearts June 10 2010, 18:37:09 UTC

Ooooh, I like this. You should definitely continue it; there's not enough angst of this flavor for the ship :)

manueluv June 10 2010, 19:35:43 UTC

The angst. Your depictions of their undeniable attractions and their regrets are heart aching.

You do need to write some more!!

infinityonhigh2 June 11 2010, 07:15:01 UTC

That was amazingly written, I love the darkness and the emotion. You should deffo continue this, Great stuff!