Comments | barra_arisa: Will You Come To Me?

barra_arisa

Will You Come To Me?

Jan 22, 2008 07:50

Title: Will You Come To Me?
Pairing: John/Bobby, mentions Bobby/Rogue, Rogue/John is you squint.
Words: 1,068
Prompt: Aiden’s She Will Love You
Warning: Mentions character death, not sure who it could be.
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You say you're in love,
Well cursive wrote this sonnet to the end
You say you're in love but this heart still can't pretend
Everything dressed in ( Read more... )

character death, bobby/rogue, slash, bobby/john, iceman/pyro, pyro/rogue

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barra_arisa January 22 2008, 19:39:37 UTC

Now all I can think of is John B-B-Q-ing the cat when the cops so up and shoot Logan. *remembers the fluffy white cat* I am changing that now to a cat and I am naming it Inootz after you.

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barra_arisa January 23 2008, 07:47:31 UTC

Yes, yes I did. *torches fluffy white kitty*

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ayumie January 22 2008, 17:30:59 UTC

*sigh*
Why does everybody keep killing the boys? I'm depressed now.
Great work, though!

barra_arisa January 22 2008, 19:38:37 UTC

Aw, sorry for making you depressed. *hugs* Blame the muse, not the author.

ayumie January 22 2008, 20:10:56 UTC

Oh, but I demand that the author write me something cute and fluffy to cheer me up. Pretty please?

barra_arisa January 23 2008, 07:47:55 UTC

We'll see how my next song fic goes.

NICE asm613 January 24 2008, 23:20:26 UTC

Very well done. It sucks when you have to pass on the message of "I Love You" engraved on a gravestone instead of spoken against your lovers' lips. You said Bobby or John died- then why did you put this in?

>>Spike had only been living at the mansion a few weeks, he didn’t know John as anything other than Pyro and he didn’t think. He acted as he’d been trained to act. Too bad for him John and Bobby did the same.<<

It reads like Spike attacked John; but Bobby and John either defended themselves and/or counter attacked. Spike would be able to kill one of the two when both are against him?

Rogue's words were great- she loved them both and would let them love each other.

Great work- keep it up!

Re: NICE barra_arisa January 25 2008, 00:16:21 UTC

Spike did attack John, you forget Logan was in the room as well, so it would be two vs two. Logan had John by the throat, John did have his fire, but then Spike attacked, so Bobby could have defended John against one or the other and John could have done the same. So in theory, John could have let Logan stab him and deflect Spike's attack, or Bobby could have gotten between John and Spike, trying to get Logan off of John and gotten caught in the cross fire.

And thanks for the compliments.