Someday Will Be Our Day

Jan 24, 2008 16:08

Title: Someday Will Be Our Day
Prompt: Aiden’s The Opening Departure
Words: 750
Pairings: Bobby/John
Warning: None
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Close your eyes
The rain won't wash away
Close your eyes
The rain won't wash away

The car pulled up and you walked out into the rain without a care in the world. We’d already said goodbye, we’d argued about you leaving for months, but you ( Read more... )

slash, bobby/john

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barra_arisa January 25 2008, 00:17:31 UTC
Thanks so much. I always like people complimenting me on my work. Leave suggestions, you might make me write another story.

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barra_arisa January 26 2008, 03:19:20 UTC
Well, I feel doubly special because you reviewed for me. :D I am a tragic romance whore *points ot stories* but I do like my happy endings as well. And I just got their newest CD from a friend and have been listening to it, thus the influx of Aiden songs.

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stranj100 January 25 2008, 01:13:52 UTC
This whole paragraph is perfect.<3: You always liked the rain. You didn’t like being wet, but you did like the rain which I always thought was the funniest thing in the world. Rain meant you couldn’t use your powers, I pointed out once, as we sat on the roof and watched the lightening storm. Yes, you’d said, but then I couldn’t use them either. We were equal then, no powers, no defenses, just two teenagers. You kissed me then, for the first time and before I knew it my eyes were closed and from then on I loved the rain too.

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barra_arisa January 25 2008, 01:49:59 UTC
Thanks, I really did like the way this one came out, happy with a side of mild fluff.

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ayumie January 25 2008, 07:00:35 UTC
Aww. That was a nice change from all the angst.

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barra_arisa January 25 2008, 07:21:08 UTC
Thanks. See? Telling an author you want something happier does get results. Or it does for me at least.

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ayumie January 25 2008, 20:49:26 UTC
You're so good to me ^_-

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barra_arisa January 25 2008, 20:53:26 UTC
You reviewed, that makes you awesome and good to me, I reward my reviewers. Spread the word. ;)

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barra_arisa January 25 2008, 18:49:32 UTC
*nods* I remembered the story and eanted to honor it because it was awesome.

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x_if_i_left_x January 25 2008, 14:21:47 UTC
That was beautiful. I loved John just dropping his stuff and opening his arms like that.

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barra_arisa January 25 2008, 18:50:39 UTC
I swear that scene came into my head due to an unintentionally watched chick flick, just not sure which one. Or maybe it was the music video to the sone 'Whickey Lullaby', I dunno.

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