Rewrite #3

[barrytelium]

Red Formula's second draft was not nearly as painful as this. Every page is an ordeal for me.

Like eating a giant tube of your favorite ice cream, I've become numb to the taste and unsure whether I like it.  It's a terrible feeling.

Can someone just option this so then (1) I get confirmation that it's all been worth it and (2) My rewrites can be more

Comments

[kramer_on_fire]

My fingers are crossed. (this makes typing vwry hqnrd)