We Have To Go Back - Primeval_Denial Art Prompt Challenge Fic Part II

[basched]

Title: We Have To Go Back Part 2
Characters/Pairings: Matt/Becker, Connor, Lester, Abby
Word Count: 10,656
Rating: T, 15
Disclaimed: I don't own anything from here except my one OC.
Summary: They stopped New Dawn, but made it even worse instead.
Author's Note: This is my story for primeval_denial 's Art prompt Challenge.  I had to split it because LJ said it was

Comments

[freddiejoey]

A triumph from beginning to end hon.

Tense and vivid and keeping me right on the edge of my wonky computer chair. Love how you interwove the two Matts into the plot and into Becker's feelings.

And with the loveliest conclusion.

[basched]

Thanks GAL! XD I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it! Had to have a happy ending. I had to. :)

[joshinator]

Completely awesome!!!!!

[basched]

Thanks! :)

[reggietate]

I had the feeling Future!Becker and everyone else was going to be dead *meep* But I could understand why Future!Matt wanted to die. At least one of the Matt's is going to be happy, and Becker, too.Terrific story :-)

[basched]

Yeah...but they changed the future, so it is yay!

Thanks for reading it. Means a lot. :)

[knitekat]

Brilliant. Poor Future!Matt, losing everyone and wanting to die.

Yay for Matt and Becker finally getting on the same page.

[basched]

Yeah, a tragic future was changed by the fellas finally getting things sorted.

Also me thinks the triceratops might have helped a bit! XD

[knitekat]

*pets triceratops and offers it food*

[basched]

Lol! It did a very good job! XD

[deinonychus_1]

Oh, this was fantastic! Poor Future Matt, no wonder he was so determined to make it a suicide mission, and no wonder he was just as determined that Becker wasn't going to die with him. But luckily, Becker is a stubborn and determined bugger as well, and wasn't going to leave him alone in that horrible future world.

I had a horrible feeling Future Matt was going to die, meeeeep! But he saved Becker, and together they saved the world, and our boys finally got a clue and sorted themselves out. Yey!

I loved what you've done with the fic, and how it used the art and the future world and the anomaly, and the boys being angsty and serious. I'd been worried about how much 'plotty' stuff to put into the art, without it being too restrictive for the writer, but this was wonderful! :-)

[basched]

It pleases me so much to know that this story did justice to your fabulous art! It inspired me so much and while it was very angsty for a mo and Future Mat did die, it had to have a happy ending.

Thank you so much! XD