Fic: A Special Addition [Hawaii Five-0: Steve/Danny, NC-17]

[basket_ofposies]

Title: A Special Addition
Chapter: 3
Author: basket_ofposies
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: Overall: NC-17 // Chapter Rating: PG
Summary: Danny was with child-only in this pineapple-infested hellhole could this happen.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: MPreg
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
A/N: I'm trying to write this & get it out asap because I start work

Comments

[bfive0]

Lol Danno & pineapples xD

[basket_ofposies]

The inevitable hehe :)

[heffermonkey]

I've yet to comment on this so far but I love this fic. No idea why because Mpreg has never been a 'genre' I read (or ever wrote until H50) but for some reason this fandom makes me read EVERYTHING and OMG - love your take on the Mpreg storyline.

Danny craving pinapples (okay in salsa form but still Pineapple hee). I love the evolving relationship of Steve and Danny - Danny's 'hormones', Steve's protective mode and all kept brilliantly in character.

loving it x

[basket_ofposies]

Oh I know... this fandom just makes me go to levels I've never thought I'd reach...

And thank you! I was worried about getting out of character with this so this comment just made my day :)

[jazzybabe56]

“You put cocaine in this, didn’t you?”

that made me LOL!!

loving Danny and his weird (for him) cravings! this is fun....♥

[basket_ofposies]

Hehe I hoped someone would get a giggle out of that.

Thank you so much for commenting!

[grnidshrk]

I'm enjoying this quite a bit, which is saying something but I usually don't like these types of fics, but for some reason this show makes me want to read them.

I would also like to point out that the font of your layout is a bit light and quite . . . Small, if you could make it more readable please.

[basket_ofposies]

Thank you so much!

And yes, I noticed that and was on the look for a layout (but I'm awfully picky...) however, I just changed it and tweaked the colors of the new one. Hopefully it's easier on the eyes. Let me know!

[grnidshrk]

Much better. I can see and read everything you've written without squinting now!! Thnx, and wish you luck on your next installments of this fic

[serenity_pen]

“You put cocaine in this, didn’t you?” Danny accused, his spoon reluctantly dropping into the bowl.

I have so much love for this sentence! I'm glad I wasn't drinking anything when I read it because I would have blown it all over my screen!

This is a fantastic story! Looking forward to more!

[basket_ofposies]

Haha, that was my favorite line as I was writing it! :) I'm glad you liked it too hehe

Thank you!