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bass_is_sexy

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May 30, 2005 20:28

OK, so I guess Im gonna post these 2 poems i wrote. Theyre for our poetry assignment in english. The second one is more like song lyrics then a poem, but im gonna call it a poem so i can turn it in. I wouldnt recomend reading the second one if your a republican. Give me feed back on it, and be honest, good or bad, i appriciate both ( Read more... )

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Awsome! anonymous June 1 2005, 01:32:16 UTC

Wow thats really good. I love it. You should write poems more often. The untitled one is so haunting. And there's so much truth to "W". Nice work, Loren.

Re: Awsome! bass_is_sexy June 1 2005, 04:51:52 UTC

Thanks. Itd be nice to know who Im talking to, but thanks none the less.

thismaykill June 1 2005, 03:28:02 UTC

they're both really good
i love them.

p.s
sorry about today, i was really tired.. i came home, and passed out for 5 hours straight. maybe we can hang out tommorow instead?

bass_is_sexy June 1 2005, 04:47:21 UTC

lol, its alright. And sorry about not being on AIM when you were talking to me, i had a band thing and forgot to sign off. If you get this before i talk to you again you should sign on aim.