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Jun 20, 2004 19:28

Ok well I wrote another dumb song I don't even know what it's about but read and you guys tell me what you think it's about? and if you like it

---Verse 1---

here i am
dont feel sorry
just because
i missed the party
please come back
im all alone
i need you here
to feel at home

---Pre Chorus---

cuz im lost without you
the day i cannot make it through
when ( Read more... )

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kiss_me_hard_73 June 21 2004, 03:37:49 UTC
hey.. i think ur song is sooooo beautiful
i love it.. its so pretty
it doesnt suck
i L♥VE YOU,
~*Rosie*~

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bassmastawill June 21 2004, 03:40:15 UTC
awwwww thanx so much I love you too!!!! we gotta do something over summer...

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kyoot_stars June 21 2004, 03:56:52 UTC
its so awesome
have a greeeat summer
♥rachelle

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bassmastawill June 21 2004, 03:59:46 UTC
lol thanx

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laugh_aholic June 21 2004, 03:57:39 UTC
thats really really really really really really good!lol, (i should've added more reallys)now i feel like a crappy writer,lol, L8Rz( & don't ever say your songs suck cause they don't!lol, great reason huh?, hehe ) bye!!

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bassmastawill June 21 2004, 04:00:55 UTC
lol thanx and I'll try to keep a more positive attitude about my songs

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unforgetable_ June 21 2004, 04:16:07 UTC
r u kidding me!?
bad!? yeah rite!
thats a reallllly good song
it would take me forever to write a song like that
ur talented lol
<33

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bassmastawill June 21 2004, 04:18:56 UTC
lol thanx a bunch

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its chelsea!!! anonymous June 21 2004, 21:57:27 UTC
i thought it was really sexy kool ... its gorgeous (i dunno how to spell it) but its really pretty...i just cant figure out wat its about!
sorry

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Re: its chelsea!!! bassmastawill June 22 2004, 15:11:33 UTC
lol it's ok thanx though!!

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