[miss.watson.reprose]

[miss_watson]

A poem from middleschool.
(x-posted to miss_watson and crash_babies[Peachy

Comments

[undetectedbeing]

I never thought about it that way...

It's beautiful

[revhorndog]

Dammit that's beautiful! ♥

[the_wigga]

love it<3 <3 <3 <3

I don't know if you ever got my email with this poem attached so I'll post it on here:

flaw

the boy, trampling down the incline of contemplative situations
---------------------he's at a loss
Speechless and dismounted from the consternation of his mind-state
---------------------he takes advantage
Stepping over the marbel of previous mishappenings and hallucinations,
he encounters a figment. The figment greets him.
The boy can only gesture.
The boy can only reveal a diminutive wave.
The figment approaches. A female exposes her appearance.
---------------------she speaks
"My name is perfect", the girl said.
The boy silently weeps and replies "my name is flaw"

ewriddle

^.^ cheerio...hope you like it.
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"Comments are ♥"

[miss_watson]

That's amazing, m'dear. I love the end. Now I feel sad and I am going to use that as an excuse to be a lush. xD

[the_wigga]

I wrote it right after I found out my beautiful lady didn't love me anymore.

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I rarely write...maybe once every 5 months.
I want to be a writer but I no longer am recieving the motivation.

Oh well, heart you.
Take care.

[uglynothingirl]

great metaphor :D
I love some metaphors.

[clearlyseen90]

i really really like this.

thank you for enlightening my day :)