Comments | baticeer: gestalt [1/1]

baticeer

gestalt [1/1]

Oct 09, 2010 01:29

it's like a circle coming together, trapping him inside. [morty/whitney/falkner OT3]
pokemon; romance/humor/drama/idefk; pg13; 3000 words

( let's get together & feel alright )

rating: pg13, fandom: pokemon

Comments 4

neutralize October 9 2010, 06:54:43 UTC

b-bawwww Falkner ;;

Ah man, I would have never considered these three together but I seriously ship them now! They really do compliment Falkner's stiff personality well, and you captured a lovely dynamic between them. AND THE ENDING WAS SO PRECIOUS, AH MY GOD.

I really liked the circle concept you incorporated in it, and I'm sort of sad it wasn't expanded on further? Honestly it made me think of birds flying circumnavigate, which obviously suits Bird Boy to a T, but I digress. This was a cute fic! ;u; <3

baticeer October 9 2010, 17:22:32 UTC

but I seriously ship them now!
then my mission here is complete B)
i'm into the OT3s like woah these days. i just love the three person relationship dynamics~

thank you bb! i'm glad you enjoyed it! and yeah, at the end i was like, "whoops, probably should've done more with the whole overlying theme" but i was feeling lazy, lol

ibuberu October 9 2010, 12:37:52 UTC

THIS IS NICE. I love the way you fleshed out their individual characters and melded them together, and all from Falkner's point of view too. The setting of the seedy bar was particularly well painted, and I just loved the final scene at the top of the Tin Tower. Amazing, amazing, you were able to work with their separate dynamics and their relationship as one, which I thought was pretty awesome.

' But… the ghosts themselves are beautiful, in a melancholy sort of way. Anyone who can see them is lucky, I think': melancholic, maybe?

baticeer October 9 2010, 17:31:27 UTC

th-thank you so much~
i'm glad you liked it!

and yeah, melancholic might sound better there :x