fata morgana [1/1]

Nov 20, 2010 23:00

she walks with her ghosts looking over her shoulder. [ishida/orihime, ulquiorra, ichigo, tatsuki, chad, sora]
bleach; drama/supernatural; pg13; 3000 words

we're all missing something )

fandom: bleach, rating: pg13

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fat November 21 2010, 07:38:22 UTC
i love the mellow feeling throughout this entire piece. heart-wrenching, yet with a glimmer of hope. my favourite line: And as he turns away, she notices how he walks in a strange manner, like he’s waiting for someone to fill the small, empty space beside him. perfect.

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baticeer November 22 2010, 04:06:58 UTC
thank you so much &hearts
i quite liked that line as well!

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loquaciousquark November 22 2010, 16:26:21 UTC
This was really pretty. I actually think the line fat pointed out is my favorite as well. There's just something so expressive and simple about it. Thanks so much for sharing!

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baticeer November 23 2010, 21:02:29 UTC
thank youuu &hearts
i'm glad you enjoyed it~

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