Collateral Damage: Final Chapter

[batmanswiss]

Neal came to slowly, his body protesting the effort of cracking open an eye. He settled for just the one, finding it easier than trying to force the other and focus them at the same time. A quick glance told him he was in a hospital. Another look and he could see Peter at his bedside, awkwardly slumped in a tacky blue-cushioned hospital chair.

Neal

Comments

[caseyf123]

WOW. That final chapter was intense. Nice Job!

[marissaangell]

awesome chapter!

[solstice1394]

Love the final chapter! Love the stormy around Peter and then to have Peter look back at the bed and see a sleeping Neal. That made me smirk only because that would be something Neal would do...heeeheeehee.

[batmanswiss]

Thanks! :D If you liked this one, I have some more posted here and on FF.N as well!

[sapphire2309]

Loved the description of family --> "What he had found was an assortment of lawmen and criminals, all bound together by the man who lay bleeding on the operating table." Really well written.

[leahk80]

nicely done!