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We just take what's ours

Aug 14, 2011 09:14

Title: We just take what's ours
Author: battlefightfly
Length: one-shot
Pairing: Kyumin, Yewook
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own the plot but not the people.
Summary: Sungmin doesn't like his work in the Choi Bank. What happens when some robbers decide to drop by?
Notes: AU

a/n: I wrote it after I heard someone tell me about the "Public Enemies" with Johnny Depp. This ( Read more... )

p: yewook, fanfiction, r: pg-13, p: kyumin

Comments 13

blurzpoo August 14 2011, 07:58:26 UTC

Are you gonna continue this?? As in have another chappie whereby the robbers, Kyu and Sungie come back?

battlefightfly August 14 2011, 08:18:36 UTC

The sequel is being written and is halfway done. And Yesung will come, I assure you but I don't know if Kyuhyun will...

blurzpoo August 14 2011, 09:45:23 UTC

Ah Please do write for Kyu oso.... I want KYUMIN interaction.... Sorry for being greedy =P

battlefightfly August 14 2011, 18:39:10 UTC

It depends on what my muse says. Blame him! *points at Min
You're not greedy I want the same thing!
And thank you for you comment!

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battlefightfly August 14 2011, 18:41:47 UTC

Ok, I'm not going to end without a sequel if you all don't want me to. ^_^
I'm so glad that you liked it!

nocturndreamer August 14 2011, 16:27:08 UTC

What mighty flirts those robbers are lol Nice portrayal of Kyu and Min here.

"What are you waiting for, the police surely are half way here!" the bank worker cried.

This really made me laugh! I like the humor and how easy this is to read. I look forward to more chaps! With an S, yes.

battlefightfly August 14 2011, 18:55:34 UTC

At first Min was a little blank. Then, when I was re-writing it... Something weird happened and puff! this Sungmin came out.

It was supposed to be a one-shot! Really!

I'm so happy that you liked it and all!
(Daddy! Erica says she liked my fic! OMG, yes, she did!)

nocturndreamer August 14 2011, 19:01:19 UTC

Also I can imagine Yesung really saying those things with his glare but with a smirk on his face lol

but you know, I was kind of expecting this to end with Min and Wook tied to a bed. lolol just trolling with you.

mylonelysmile August 14 2011, 21:46:55 UTC

oh i like this
minwook steals the robbers heart?
haha
bad siwon here, but ming was the one who give access lol

like evrybody, i want sequel
kyumin! x3
i mean, kyu took mings necklaxe right?
only fair to tell about it on sequel
haha //demanding

i really like this xD

battlefightfly August 15 2011, 08:11:24 UTC

So glad you liked it!

Yes, sequel is being written but... I won't be able to post it before the 28th, unfortunately. Be patient!