The Photographer - Chapter 23

[baucriminals]

                Another week passed and Neal still couldn’t remain conscious. The doctors weren’t too concerned, his brain activity was normal, he just wasn’t fighting. Hotch, on the other hand, was making great progress both physically and mentally. The team noticed his behavior had improved since the envelope had appeared on his bedside table. No

Comments

[underspell102]

It's me again! Just finished the fic, and I demand a sequel! :-) This is seriously one of the best fics I've read.

[baucriminals]

=D Thanks SO much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I do intend to write a sequel, but it'll be a little further down the road. I'm glad you hold it with such high regard! It means a lot to me :)

[i_lovecm]

Congrats on writing such an amazing story! I don't think the CM producers themselves could write a better one! Between the details, the story line and the emotions, how you got into each team member's head, it is easily the best thing I have ever read. I was on the edge of my seat from the time the profile pointed to Hotch til the end, and I winced every time the least bit of harm was thought upon one of the team members. The suspense in revealing the unsub's identity was priceless. Also, in was terrifically in character, how Hotch would blame himself and be ashamed to show pain, how Morgan would want to smash the unsub's head in, how Reid would react to the Diladid details, etc. I truly think this is good enough to become an actual Criminal Minds episode. The quote at the end was a nice touch. Good luck with future fan fics!
-i_lovecm

[baucriminals]

Wow, I don't even know what to say! That's the nicest review anyone has ever given! Thank you, thank you, thank you!! I am honestly left speechless by your review, and I can't stop smiling!! Thank you! I hope the next one doesn't disappoint =]