i don't get it. the chicken and egg joke. and it wont be funny if you have to explain it to me. so i'll just continue on being oblivious. happy turkey day!
So your freaking thanksgiving break too Alex? I thought it was only me!
I hadn't heard that version of the joke before, I've only heard it where the chicken lights up a cigarette and turns to the egg. I think the heavy breathing directs attention more towards the main pun of the joke, which is of course good, but it doesn't have as good flow. Perhaps if you were too reword the "and the chicken turns to the egg, breathing heavily, and says," so as to reduce the breaks in the line, it would flow better and utterly trump the other version. Then again, that probably wouldn't matter at all if you were telling the joke verbally instead of writing it, so you can probably ignore my suggestion.
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do you get it now?
saw 2 was awful alex. not because it wasnt scary or twisted or well done, i just hated it. :(
ps. nice joke.....
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I hadn't heard that version of the joke before, I've only heard it where the chicken lights up a cigarette and turns to the egg. I think the heavy breathing directs attention more towards the main pun of the joke, which is of course good, but it doesn't have as good flow. Perhaps if you were too reword the "and the chicken turns to the egg, breathing heavily, and says," so as to reduce the breaks in the line, it would flow better and utterly trump the other version. Then again, that probably wouldn't matter at all if you were telling the joke verbally instead of writing it, so you can probably ignore my suggestion.
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you should call me sometime...I haven't talked to you in forever in a day.
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