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[bballchk08]

School wasn't difficult to start. No background checks were needed, it was just asking for us to lie . . . and we did. It was werid coming up with all of this information, it was like being able to pick exactly who you were and who your family was . . . even if we did have to make it somewhat realstic. I chose to be from Australia as did he. We

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[_notthatsocial_]

This is really good.. I'm interested. : )

[writinnblood]

nice, just enough to keep a person hooked and curious, but it's not over done.
you over use the "..." thing though, it's for pauses in sentences, you need commas instead, but its fine at the end.