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[bballchk08]

So I said that I would put what I wrote on here. One of them is like a better version of something I already wrote on here, but ya. None of this are like finished or revised at all and they certainly don't rhyme . . . and I prefer writing rhyming poetry but tell me what you think

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[bballchk08]

The second line of the first one said
~*Broken shreds of glass stuck in my hands*~
What do you like better?

The second one was written because of a song we heard in clubs today and I was writing words tot he beat.

The fifth one could be about anything, but I wrote it about marijuana

The sixth one can be interpreted any way, but to me it's about cigerettes and yeah

The seventh one was written because I noticed that a classmate wasn't there and I was thinking how no one seemed phased by the lack of the person and I was thinkin about whether existance emans anything.

The eighth one was written spur of the moment as I wrote this entry. I had the first line and I wanted to use it so I came up w/ that-I know it's religous but I am . . . and I think it's sad.

The last one was inspired by the movie Fight Club-the first line at least and the rest just kinda flowed.

What do you guys think?

[_notthatsocial_]

Those are beautiful, Katy. You are such a good poet. : )

[writinnblood]

-=jealous=- wow. your poems are awesome. teach me how to write poems like that! -=joking=-but, dude, those totally kick arse!

unrelated...what did you write for writers showcase and maybe i can give you a ride since you lost the parking pass And did it say what place you got, cuz mine didnt and...yeah...