Music of your heart chapter14

Jun 10, 2008 13:03

 Pairing: Jack/Ennis, OC . AU/AU
Rating: Between R and NC17

Disclaimer: The Brokeback Mountain Characters belong to Annie Proulx. No disrespect is intended and no profit is made.

Feedback: Yes please! But bear in mind this is my first fic and English is not my first language.......

Summary: Jack is a musician, Ennis a successful Music Manager in ( Read more... )

moyh ch14

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adahleah June 10 2008, 12:30:40 UTC
I did not think Jack recovery was going to go so smooth, Luckily he has Ennis there with him.

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bbbm_girl June 11 2008, 08:34:05 UTC
:D
Well, i do like for things to go smooth, i didnt wanted to torture them more then its already done!

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Music Of Your Heart Chapter 14 bmshirts June 10 2008, 15:50:32 UTC
What a sweet, loving chapter. I love this Ennis for being there for Jack. I hope it stays this way. Jack needs him very bsdly now. He really has no one else he can talk to. Ennis can talk as one gay man to another, and help Jack with the hurt he feels, not only from the beating (he'll recover from that) but from the rejection he's gotten from people who were supposed to care.
I hope Jack and Ennis will find some place together after Jack is released from the hospital. He's still going to need help and care at home.
Thanks. Carole

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Re: Music Of Your Heart Chapter 14 bbbm_girl June 11 2008, 08:31:24 UTC
U can be sure it will stay that way, Carole! They are stuck with each other for life ;)

Jas

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Re: Music Of Your Heart Chapter 14 bmshirts June 11 2008, 09:56:15 UTC
Yippee!! Carole

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fl1789 June 10 2008, 20:03:48 UTC
Jack's physical and mental recovery is going to be hard,
for both of them because at this point Ennis is so into him that I think he can feel Jack's pain in his own flesh

thanks for the quick update

kiss,

fl.

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bbbm_girl June 11 2008, 08:32:39 UTC
Jack is a tought guy, he will be ok ;)
Yeah, the worse thing is if someone we love is hurt...

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sweetje June 10 2008, 23:16:52 UTC
I love the way Ennis takes care of Jack. He's so loving and tender. I hope that he can help Jack get through this difficult time.
Another wonderful chapter. I'm looking forward to your next update. : )
Debra

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bbmjack324 June 11 2008, 03:33:37 UTC
Another very sweeet chapter. I enjoy it so

Thank you for listening to me Ennis, I just can’t bear to keep it all to myself inside."

"Darlin’, I know how important it is to have someone listen to you. You can talk to me anytime about anything that bothers you. Ok?"....“He is a sweet boy, take good care of him Ennis.”

“Don’t worry. I won’t let him outta my sights.” He said, kissing Jack’s sweaty temple and hair.

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