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bbdomme

Torchwood Fic Jack/Owen PGish

Oct 11, 2007 10:43

Title: Untitled
Author: Brenda (BBDomme)
Characters: Jack/Owen
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None
Warnings: There are boys kissing
Prompt: Fragile
Word Count: 1883
Summary: Jack understands more than Owen knows
Author's notes: Thanks to Karen for betaing! This is for Becky. It's late, but she gave me the prompt one day when I offered to write something to ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

becky_h October 11 2007, 21:17:17 UTC

Whoa. You won me in the first paragraph and kept winning me all the way through with this. It's very Owen, very Jack, very evocative. I love the contrast between heat and cold and Jack and Owen and snow and not melting and it. It's just *good* and lovely and the characters are perfect.

Also, interestingly, there's a couple of episodes of Doctor Who that have snow that's not. One is the TARDIS seeding clouds, more or less, but the other is the ash of an alien ship drifting down, after Torchwood in London destroys it (against the Doctor's wishes) - and that's the episode the Doctor loses the hand Jack kept in a jar in TW. So. Even a neat solid tie in there.

Just wonderful.

bbdomme October 11 2007, 21:31:35 UTC

Thank you! So glad you liked it. I'll stop my anxious fretting now.

And wow, that's pretty weird. Cool, but weird. Now I'm going to have to go find those.

becky_h October 11 2007, 21:32:25 UTC

They're the two christmas specials. The Christmas Invasion and The Run Away Bride. The Christmas Invasion's the one you want, I think. It is weird, but it's also AWESOME.

...Can I link this from my fandom journal or would you rather I didn't?

bbdomme October 11 2007, 21:46:43 UTC

Nope! I don't mind at all! *flattered*

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_medley_ October 11 2007, 22:13:20 UTC

Here from Becky's journal and I just have to say that I love this to bits. The metaphor you've got going here, frozen and thawing and heat and cold, it just works so beautifully for these two, and Owen's grumbling and thoughts are so very him.

bbdomme October 11 2007, 22:23:32 UTC

Thank you! I appreciate that so much.

matsujo9 October 12 2007, 01:06:16 UTC

>.>

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baffledking October 12 2007, 04:32:52 UTC

PRETTY

matsujo9 October 12 2007, 04:36:10 UTC

Danke!

baffledking October 12 2007, 04:32:39 UTC

oh nice.

bbdomme October 12 2007, 04:33:35 UTC

Thank you!

gonewithoutjam October 12 2007, 18:13:08 UTC

Not a pairing I generally go for but you made me believe it and like it. Just one tiny nitpick, about the line you have Owen say, and it's something I seem to see all over the place

"No, I like making shite up just so I sound nutters."

You don't sound nutters. You can be a nutter or sound like a nutter, but it isn't used in the same way as 'sounding nuts' might be in US English. Sounding mental or barmy or mad would also be fine.