Teenagers in Love, Chapter One: Pool Party

[bbmgirlfan]

Title: Teenagers in Love
Pairing: Heath & Jake
Rating: PG?
Disclaimer: I don't know any of these people. I'm totally making it all up!

Author's Note: Heath and Jake meet as teenagers. The story begins and ends long before Brokeback Mountain. Thanks to Lola and Heather for beta feedback!!

Teenagers in Love, Chapter One: Pool Party

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Comments

[poisonshock]

awww!

[bbmgirlfan]

Thanks!!:)

[anonymous]

How old are these boys?
Jake's father better watch out he doesn't get busted for allowing underage drinking in the house!!

[bbmgirlfan]

They are between 17 and 20. And Jake's father has no idea they are drinking!

[sienata]

where is the rest of this story? i only see chapter 1 here. :)

[bbmgirlfan]

Ack!! Really? I'll have to take a look and see what's wrong.

[sienata]

i found the rest of the chapters when i clicked on recent entries. when you get time, it would make it easier for folks to find the whole story if you went back and added the TIL tag. :) I love this story. i have it copied.

hugs. s.

[bbmgirlfan]

It means so much to me that you love it!!

And thanks, I do need to add tags. At first, I knew nothing of tags and am still trying to catch up.

[luvenck]

HI! I just read your one-shot! It was very good. I don't think I've been befriended by you yet, and would like the opportunity to be so. I wish you could have made this into a story instead of a one shot *smiling*. It had promises for a great story! Thanks, Cat :)

[bbmgirlfan]

Hi Cat!

I have written a few one-shots, but Teenagers in Love is not one of them. There are several more chapters.

Here's the link to chapter 2 ... http://bbmgirlfan.livejournal.com/2207.html

But maybe you mean New York Minute? That one just felt finished. I couldn't envision the rest of the story.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Jeanine