Teenagers in Love, Chapter Six

[bbmgirlfan]

Title: Teenagers in Love
Pairing: Heath & Jake
Rating: PG?
Disclaimer: I don't know any of these people. I'm totally making it all up!

Author's Note: Heath and Jake meet as teenagers. The story begins and ends long before Brokeback Mountain. Thanks to Lola and Heather for beta feedback!! To read the previous chapters, click on my LJ link. I have no

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really enjoying your story

[sienata]

Hey- i read the first part of your story along time ago - really liked it - but haven't been reading much lately since i've been writing - wanted to catch up tonite- way to leave me hanging! hope there is more soon! i'll be checking! S!

Re: really enjoying your story

[bbmgirlfan]

I love YOUR story so much that I feel honored beyond belief that you're reading and enjoying mine!!

Thank you so much!

The reason I took so long to update was because I thought it was crap. So your kind words mean a lot to me!

Re: really enjoying your story

[sienata]

Your story is very good - interesting, emotional, taking us on a trip as they get to know each other, grow closer, deal with issues. I think your story helped inspire me to start my own story - i even almost copied your title! Sorry 'bout that!

I am busily working on chapter 14 of mine - you need to get busy on chapter 7 of yours. I'm hoping to post tonight! Will keep checking back on yours! Thanks for all of your great comments on my story - they really spur me on! Later! S!

Re: really enjoying your story

[bbmgirlfan]

Thank you so much!!

And, oooooh! Did you say "posting tonight"????

Gotta go look!

[dclittledarlin]

Another great chapter. Poor Jake and Heath. I hope you don't keep them apart for too long, it's soooo sad. I love the phone calls, they are so sweet and so full of angst. Please bring these beautiful boys together again soon!!! Again I apologize for not commenting on all of your work before now. It is a joy to read, even though it's breaking my heart.
Patiently, but very eagerly, awaiting your next update,
karla

[bbmgirlfan]

Wow, a joy to read!!! Thanks so much!

[blackbird_y]

Why..oh whyyyyyy.. Why pretend something for the sake of someone else's well-being? It's just so wrong. :( I feel so sad for the boys. *sigh* :'(

Nev

[bbmgirlfan]

Awww! That's how I felt, too, Nev!!