Prelude to a Kiss :)

[bbmgirlfan]

Title: Prelude to a Kiss :)
Pairing: Heath & Jake (RPS)
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I don't know any of these people. I'm totally making it all up! 
Summary: One-shot that occurs during the filming of that movie we all love

"I want you to want me! I need you to need me..."

The waitress appeared with his third beer almost before Heath finished his second.

Comments

[under_wyo_skies]

Did they meet at the trailer I wonder?

Yeah, I think so!

:) Lovely one shot...happy to see you're still writing! And I wouldn't mind a sequel to Teenagers in Love...

:)

[bbmgirlfan]

Sigh. Positive feedback from the exquisite Helen!

Well, I wrote that in response to a writing prompt from another board. When I tried to write a second scene, I totally COULDN'T.

So "still writing", may not be entirely accurate.

Teenagers in Love was so hard to write, especially towards the end, that I doubt I could even get my mind to go back there. I was a bit traumatized by it, really!

Love you, Helen!

I miss your spirit and wit on the boards.

Jeanine

[sienata]

I just saw this. I'm not sure how I missed it when you posted it, but I did. Sorry, it's actually very good. You're dialogue is very easy to read and HEAR

[bbmgirlfan]

Sienna, that is SO encouraging!!!

Thank you so much!

(((((Hugs)))))

Jeanine

[brokeback1963]

OMG!!! **THUD THUD THUD**

This was just brilliant!!! Very gorgeous and funny.

**
Jake laughed and waited until both their drinks had been placed on the table and they were once again alone to lean in and ask, "what if it happens to both of us?"

"If it happens to both of us, meet me at my trailer after we finish the scene!"
**

Such a GREAT ending!! Bravo!!!

Lots of love and hugs.

Tammy.

[bbmgirlfan]

Awww, how sweet!

Thank you so much, Tammy!!

Jeanine

[120cassie]

I like how your Jake and Heath are so easy to read..This just comes across very naturally and gives off a sense of their friendship - which I know we all wish was more.. Your little one shots could all be expanded upon..

I like how you write quite short chapters yet pack so much in it makes the reader want more..Your stories always stay with me for a while.. I'm going to have to copy them cos I'll want to reread.. Hope that's OK.. And I friended you cos I don't want to miss anything else :)

Hugs
Julie

[bbmgirlfan]

Julie, what a delight your comments are!

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it!

Jeanine

[chamilet]

Holy crap. *thud*

[bbmgirlfan]

*giggles*

Glad you liked this, too! :)

Jeanine