Fate Meets Destiny: Chapter Fifteen

Apr 12, 2008 11:36

Title: Fate Meets Destiny 
Author: bbmgirlfan
Pairing: Ennis/Jack (AU/AU)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: just playing with the boys, they don't belong to me

Summary: Jack and Ennis grew up together and even went to the same college before moving back home to take over each family's business. They became roommates but that's all they were! Or, is it?

Chapter Fifteen )

chapter fifteen, fate meets destiny, au/au, jack/ennis, bbmgirlfan

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sienata December 28 2008, 07:43:46 UTC
Good question, Ennis. I hope Jack comes home soon so you can ask him!!!! :)

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bbmgirlfan December 29 2008, 06:11:39 UTC
You're right, that is an all-important question. And Jack is the best person to ask.

Thanks so much, Sienna, for reading and commenting. It means a lot to me!

Jeanine

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rouxb December 28 2008, 07:55:15 UTC
somebody find jack and tell him to get home-fast!

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bbmgirlfan December 29 2008, 06:13:58 UTC
LOL! We do need him back home, don't we?

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Jeanine

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sweetje December 28 2008, 08:24:20 UTC
Mrs. Bendelmen is a very wise lady. And I'm glad she has gotten Ennis to start thinking in a new way about the relationship he and Jack have shared through the years. I just hope he and Jack can talk about it too.

I'm sorry for not commenting on the last few chapters. I'm so far behind that I thought I could catch up a little better by reading all the chapters I have missed at once and commenting on the last chapter I read.

I love this story, and reading multiple chapters at once is a lot of fun. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. : )
Debra

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bbmgirlfan December 29 2008, 06:16:44 UTC
Debra, I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Yes, who knew Mrs. Bendelmen was paying such close attention? And I agree that Ennis and Jack need to talk about what she said.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting when you can.

Jeanine

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eandj December 28 2008, 08:38:15 UTC
yes Ennis
think about it
but I get the feeling he still needs more time to come to terms with himself
ok I'll be here when they're ready-LOL
thanks
Paula

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bbmgirlfan December 29 2008, 06:19:27 UTC
but I get the feeling he still needs more time to come to terms with himself

Paula, you are absolutely right! You know him well.

ok I'll be here when they're ready-LOL

LOL! They will be eventually. Thanks for your patience with them.

Jeanine

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bowl_of_glow December 28 2008, 09:46:30 UTC
I never commented before, but I've been reading all your chapters. I like your Jack, is so sweet and so naive sometimes. :)

* "But Mrs. Bendelmen, we're both guys!" Ennis protested.

"So?" Mrs. Bendelmen rolled her eyes, patted his knee and said it had been nice talking to him but she was going to let him get back to his afternoon. *

Ah ah, I really liked her cool reaction, that was a surprise!!

* She made it sound like we've been in love all this time and have just been too dumb to know it! *

Ennis?? Open your eyes, sweetie. Can't you see you and Jack are deeply in love with each other??
I know YOU know it!! Get over it and accept it! ;) I'm sure Jack is waiting for you... ;)
Thanks for this chapter!
*hugs*
B.

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Re: bbmgirlfan December 29 2008, 06:22:18 UTC
LOL, B! If only Ennis could hear you. But Mrs. Bendelmen does have him thinking about it.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

*hugs right back at ya*

Jeanine

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