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Five "Firsts" Ennis & Jack Never Had: Part Two

Apr 26, 2008 21:51

Title: Fate Meets Destiny
Author: bbmgirlfan
Pairing: Ennis/Jack (AU/AU)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: just playing with the boys, they don't belong to me

Summary: Jack and Ennis grew up together and even went to the same college before moving back home to take over each family's business. They became roommates but that's all they were! Or, is it?

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five things, part two, fate meets destiny, au/au, jack/ennis, bbmgirlfan

Comments 8

Sweet joetheone January 27 2009, 05:35:18 UTC

Yep it is awful sweet when you kiss someone you love and care about and so much different when you kiss just to kiss. The first indication of what it feels like to really be in love and well, I'm sure no other kiss compared even though probably ok. Joe

Re: Sweet bbmgirlfan January 27 2009, 06:11:56 UTC

You're so right! It's very different.

Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts.

Jeanine

bowl_of_glow January 27 2009, 09:33:06 UTC

I can't believe how late they realized they were in love with each other!!
Ah, boys can be so slow sometimes. lol

* "Oh my god!" Jack exclaimed as they once again surfaced for air. "I see why they grab each other's hair! After a while, you get kind of lightheaded." he told Ennis. *

Ah ah! It's the love Jack... Can't you feel it?? ;)

Re: bbmgirlfan January 28 2009, 02:47:02 UTC

LOL!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Jeanine

brokeback1963 January 27 2009, 16:32:57 UTC

"Well, do you ever worry that when the time comes to kiss someone, you won't do it right ( ... )

bbmgirlfan January 29 2009, 02:58:53 UTC

You know, your feedback makes me love my own story more!! I always love it.

Thanks so much for all of your faithful reading and commenting.

Jeanine

ifyoucantfixit2 February 20 2009, 11:46:05 UTC

I remember those kissing parties, when I was in hi school.
It was always the best when you got to kiss the one you liked,
and they liked you, but it was the big "secret" that had never
been discussed. The sweet smiles, and the tension as it started.
The best of times. I can only imagine how it would be if that
person was your best friend and you were going to spend the whole night together...oops..like this a lot. janice

bbmgirlfan February 21 2009, 06:51:51 UTC

Hi Janice!

Kissing parties. Why did they ever stop? :)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Jeanine