the law of universal gravitation 3: reciprocal relations in irreversible processes

Mar 15, 2010 19:26

Title: The Law of Universal Gravitation 3: Reciprocal Relations in Irreversible Processes
Authors: allthingsholy & juniperlane, with dashakay and montycrowley
Summary: He spends the rest of the afternoon thinking about his experiment, the methods he will use, the behaviors he will modify. He does not think about Penny’s legs beneath his dress shirt as she sashayed across the kitchen, or the ( Read more... )

author: allthingsholy, author: juniperlane, episode: 3x03, chapter: 03

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sanura March 16 2010, 01:59:47 UTC
Guh is the word. It's the only word. Except maybe wsblaaaahhh...hhh.

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juniperlane March 17 2010, 01:49:23 UTC
Haha, thanks for this lovely and articulate comment ;D

Glad you liked it!

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j_guda March 16 2010, 02:00:24 UTC
I have a response, but it's not verbal. It consists mostly of pointing at the screen and flapping my hands. So yes. Let me find some words. Perfect. Beautiful. Painful. Lovely and sharp and achy.

I love how Sheldon's convinced himself it's mostly about hurting Leonard and refuses to allow for the fact that it's less and less about that every time. The amount it's going to hurt Leonard will be inversely proportionate to Sheldon's motivation to do so.

In every story of this series so far there has been a single line that's grabbed me more than any other and this one is no different:

There is no clarity, just the building rush of blood in his veins and the sudden, startling buzz in his hands.

!!!

And I'm back to the nonverbal. ♥

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juniperlane March 17 2010, 01:51:05 UTC
I really love this comment, mostly because it's going to let me point at allthingsholy and say: yeah, that's all her right there.

I love how Sheldon's convinced himself it's mostly about hurting Leonard and refuses to allow for the fact that it's less and less about that every time. The amount it's going to hurt Leonard will be inversely proportionate to Sheldon's motivation to do so.

Also, this is awesome. Just spot on, dude.

Thanks for the awesome comment! We truly appreciate it :)

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allthingsholy March 17 2010, 05:00:36 UTC
I agree with juniperlane, your comment is awesome and made my day. Thanks for reading and reviewing and liking and letting us know.

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littlezink March 16 2010, 02:03:41 UTC
Wow. Just.....wow. Incredible chapter. It goes without saying that this was beyond hot, but I also love Sheldon's characterization.

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juniperlane March 17 2010, 01:53:10 UTC
Aw, thank you so much on both counts! :)

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lisaboston March 16 2010, 02:18:05 UTC
aaaa This was so intensely beautiful. and overwhelmingly hot. like seriously, I had to stop a few times and just walk around the room, or my head would have exploded. Would like to point out what I liked about this fic, but I can't, because I love everything in this story. wow.

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juniperlane March 17 2010, 03:30:23 UTC
Oh wow, thank you so much! I've read a few things like that, so I feel pretty honored to have at least been partially responsible for managing to get that sort of response :)

Cheers!

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padrejose March 16 2010, 02:22:39 UTC
sweet baby jesus. there's really no words at all. bravo.

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allthingsholy March 16 2010, 16:38:28 UTC
Thanks for reviewing and reading.

And also for posting with an icon of half-naked Hogdins. WELL DONE.

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