universal

[bbyah]

Title: universal
Rating: PG
Pairing: Homin
Genre: AU, Scifi
Summary: In the meantimes, between each Calamity, Yunho waits. And he searches.

Comments

[whatkindoftea]

I can't even begin to formulate a comment that describes how much I loved this!! These characters were put together so well in all of the different worlds. Time skip can be tricky, but you made it flow and you made it beautiful! Thank you for sharing this!

[bbyah]

thankkk you! I'm glad you liked it, and YES time skip is tricky. So much...planning. Highly not recommended ;;; but thank you so much for reading!

[greyrosesinjune]

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.

This entire universe - it's so well-written and realistic and I am so drawn into the entire universe itself.

Yunho and Changmin and all the universes they are in/aren't in... it's so addictive, reading this.

Thanks for writing!

[bbyah]

aw, thank you, I had a lot of fun (or really long walks) trying to figure out what universes to write....glad you enjoyed!

[vhii1217]

This is brilliant i could cry. Won't say i'm a super intelligent reader who understands every theory mentioned here, because frankly i don't, but the message and feels of homin who know of bigger worlds and differing universes really get to readers. Yunho's desperation of finding changmin and changmin's desperation of having the upper holders against him are really clear. In the end it's a battle between selfishness and selflessness, depicted in subdued way. Yunho's journey is very heart-rendering. When he met other versions of changmin and when he finally reunites with the 'real' one..... It's indescribable.

Thank you for sharing this brilliant piece!

[bbyah]

thank you so much! And hey, I'm definitely no expert on time travel myself, hahaha (I always end up jumping to the wrong century :\). I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[plinkin]

For someone who felt lost in the desert, working with an unfamiliar format, you did an amazing job. There aren't enough sci-fi/fantasy fics around and you helped fill the hole. Thank you so much. You managed to convey the workings and the feel of an entirely different world in a crazy small amount of words.

[bbyah]

thank you for reading! I was seriously worried if it made any sense at all...I'm glad you liked it. I agree, the lack of sci-fi and fantasy is unfortunate. Luckily (???) it's the only thing I seem to write .__.

[teyahtimeay]

Oh, I love this so so so much. It's perfect.

I've been playing with the idea of a timetravel fic ever since the concept for Time was released but it would never be as magnificent as this. Everything about it is so great, and the format works because in between the time skip paragraphs there's the more linear story of their past to ground it. Your writing technique is as flawless as always, but it's the story and the concept that really floored me.

Seriously, amazing work. I'm always excited to read something new from you and this was definitely no exception :3

p.s my favorite line: Sometimes Changmin can be so devastatingly perfect, it’s no wonder he condemns universes at the same rate he saves them.

guuuuhhhh /rolls around in helpless feels

[bbyah]

agh thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. and PLEASE you should totally write time travel fic because I KNOW it would be good, as usual... But thank you for reading \o/ (edit: Also, added you too! :v)

[teyahtimeay]

gurl I can't write it now, you've set the bar way too high! besides, sci-fi is my achilles heel lol.

thanks for adding me back :) though I only use my lj to post fics...if you have a tumblr I'd love to follow you there!

[bbyah]

well, even if it's not time traveling fic, as long as it's you writing it and it's homin, I guess can forgive you >:\

and yeah, same on the fic-lj...I do have a tumblr! It's currently just a dumping ground for me being ridic about homin but: http://changdollah.tumblr.com/